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Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings. Lots of looking out of the window. Hello, and thanks for dropping by.
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Really liked the effect of
Posted on Fri, 20 Jan 2017
Really liked the effect of the rhythm and rhyme. They express the desperate way so many turn to all sorts of notions to give structure to the world. The last stanza captures the calm of those who have found their own answers.
Read full commentPosted in Superstitions’ Grip
A blast of anguish, heartfelt
Posted on Fri, 20 Jan 2017
A blast of anguish, heartfelt and bleak. There's a real feeling of powerlessness and desperation.
Read full commentPosted in once life January 18, 2017
This beautiful evocation of
Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017
This beautiful evocation of the promise of spring is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!
Read full commentPosted in Promises of Spring.
I do love the images in this,
Posted on Sat, 07 Jan 2017
I do love the images in this, drawing our attention to every detail contributing to a beautiful whole.
Read full commentPosted in Promises of Spring.
I'm fascinated by this.
Posted on Fri, 06 Jan 2017
I'm fascinated by this. There's shades of Doctor Moreau, and the dialogue is very evocative of time and place. I think it needs a bit of editing - it's a bit too wordy in places and you lose the pace. But it's well worth the effort...
Read full commentPosted in Moon Over the Monkey's Back, Part 3
Pure gold. No wonder
Posted on Thu, 05 Jan 2017
Pure gold. No wonder politicians keep saying breakfast when they mean Brexit. Eggstrordinary.
Read full commentPosted in Jed and the beanstalk
Well this gives me hope for
Posted on Sat, 31 Dec 2016
Well this gives me hope for 2017. Absolutely wonderful. Dialogue that's surreal and totally believable at the same time. Great stuff.
Read full commentPosted in CC 88: My Train Station is Better than Yours
Characters so real they're
Posted on Thu, 15 Dec 2016
Characters so real they're standing in front of you. Great stuff.
Read full commentPosted in Grimms2
In my experience, those young
Posted on Mon, 05 Dec 2016
In my experience, those young ninjas don't usually stand a chance against the eyes-in-the-back-of-the-head guardian of the household! Nice evocation of childhood.
Read full commentPosted in The Shadow
Enjoyed the rhythm of this,
Posted on Mon, 05 Dec 2016
Enjoyed the rhythm of this, and sense of fun. In this weather it's all too easy to feel that the keyboard is the best option! A lovely Christmas message.
Read full commentPosted in Humour - Wasting me foddle dee doddle dee time (nonsense rhyme for Poetry Monthly)
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