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Like a pebble, sending ripples through the surface of iridescent rivers, shoals of silent fish, the crack of candescent estuaries, disassembly of systemic skin cells
To stand in front of a flower, and feel the flicker of its eyelash, and see the sun skip like a pebble inside the spaces that sings between us. And the verdure of its leaves,
I can't seem to stop using ellipses, everywhere I go it's all ... A friend says it lends my correspondence a certain fragmentary quality, constantly deferred, as if everything is consistently
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Really liked this, wistful
Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2008
Really liked this, wistful and nostalgic but at the same time so vivid. I have to agree with Doeslittle as well, loved the image of Ari in the last stanza,
'with the eye of Paris
dreaming under the heavy brow;
remembering a half-year of love
on the...Read full comment
Really liked this, wistful
Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2008
Really liked this, wistful and nostalgic but at the same time so vivid. I have to agree with Doeslittle as well, loved the image of Ari in the last stanza, 'with the eye of Paris dreaming under the heavy brow; remembering a half-year of love on the...Read full commentPosted in Café Aphrodite