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your photo is so beautiful!
Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020
your photo is so beautiful! Is that a picture of a blanket your Mother made? It is a lovely idea to give all those close to you something full of your time and love, special for each person.
Oh! Am enjoying this :0) All the details about clothes and also the fizzy drinks are great. I would not have thought of them, but they make the reader instantly aware how weird and changed everything is. I do hope this is a long story!
your photo is so beautiful!
Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2020
your photo is so beautiful! Is that a picture of a blanket your Mother made? It is a lovely idea to give all those close to you something full of your time and love, special for each person.
I like how you repeat words like yarn and row,...
Read full commentPosted in "Anna's Blanket"
Another of your lovely bird
Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020
Another of your lovely bird poems! I specially like :
a spirit of young
sparrows
proudly feathered.
Read full commentPosted in Here Birdie
This was a lovely, comforting
Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2020
This was a lovely, comforting read, I really like : "It is beauty; it is alive. It stands tall and proud and timeless…and breathes life for us."
Did you go to the ones they have on nature programmes, so huge it takes a dozen steps to walk...
Read full commentPosted in Under the Redwoods...
I missed this poem but am so
Posted on Mon, 25 May 2020
I missed this poem but am so glad I found it just now, it is great, brilliant.
Read full commentPosted in Olympian Dreams
This is so cosy! Made me feel
Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020
This is so cosy! Made me feel relaxed reading, Thankyou!
Read full commentPosted in Random thoughts...
Thankyou! Youy cannot know
Posted on Tue, 07 Jul 2020
Thankyou! Youy cannot know how much you have cheered me up :0)
Read full commentPosted in wet 6th july
"They dragged her into
Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2020
"They dragged her into Rotherhithe" This ia a great first line, not towed, you make the ship a person
"Her tales became a ramble
No one listened anymore" not only a person but an old lady
so "Dowager...becomes one more...
Read full commentPosted in Temeraire
I like this even more today,
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020
I like this even more today, it does describe exactly how I feel in our woods! It is WONDERFUL!!!
It is the sort of one where everey time another bit stands out today - "Sap of poems" :0)
Read full commentPosted in Wind in Trees by Water
Oh! Am enjoying this :0) All
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020
Oh! Am enjoying this :0) All the details about clothes and also the fizzy drinks are great. I would not have thought of them, but they make the reader instantly aware how weird and changed everything is. I do hope this is a long story!
Read full commentPosted in "Past or Present" Chapter 3
Have only read this once but
Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2020
Have only read this once but know I will come back lots of times!
Agree utterly with it all, this bit is what hit me most :
"you are not judged to be anything
other than a part of it,"
I love this about Nature, too. No...
Read full commentPosted in Wind in Trees by Water
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