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There have to be some benefits to life-out-there closing down! Hello again everyone! Sorry to have been so gone for so long! Here's a poem I've been meaning to write since the passing away of my dear neighbour last year...x
Smite the dust of the land with thine rod which was a serpent And the poverty tourists shall dribble and drool over that land Where flies shall tease...
I didn’t see it coming. A Toyota. Barcellona red metallic. I spun from the glancing blow a number of times. Graceful in a way. And then Hit the deck...
He fires a stun gun, one of them. The other pulls her by the ear and curses. She vomits. Her eyes twitch back into their sockets as her blood tiptoes...
8 of my comments have received 9 Great Feedback votes
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How lovely! Orion is my
Posted on Sat, 21 Mar 2020
How lovely! Orion is my regular companion on evening dogwalks! This really evokes the comparison between the dependability of the night sky and of the rhythms of the year with what we mortals are facing/doing/experiencing. Understated yet so, so...
I love the way, in such a few short lines, you have really captured that juxtaposition between the old, dead, uncared for remnants of winter and the power of the new colourful growth of spring. Masterful! x
Wow, what a fantastic evocation of the way we are all encountering parts of society hitherto unnoticed...it's a really thought provoking poem..., already, in (let's face it) the beginning stages of this strange and difficult time, how much more...
You've beautifully captured the nightmare dynamics of low self esteem...in extremis! These issues cause so much misery in our world, and this is a sensitive response to it.
She asks if I love her -
harder to answer by the day. ...oh...
How lovely! Orion is my
Posted on Sat, 21 Mar 2020
How lovely! Orion is my regular companion on evening dogwalks! This really evokes the comparison between the dependability of the night sky and of the rhythms of the year with what we mortals are facing/doing/experiencing. Understated yet so, so...
Read full commentPosted in Swansong
I love the way, in such a few
Posted on Thu, 26 Mar 2020
I love the way, in such a few short lines, you have really captured that juxtaposition between the old, dead, uncared for remnants of winter and the power of the new colourful growth of spring. Masterful! x
Read full commentPosted in Signs of Spring 3)
Wow, what a fantastic
Posted on Fri, 20 Mar 2020
Wow, what a fantastic evocation of the way we are all encountering parts of society hitherto unnoticed...it's a really thought provoking poem..., already, in (let's face it) the beginning stages of this strange and difficult time, how much more...
Read full commentPosted in Strange Beings in Strange Times
You've beautifully captured
Posted on Fri, 17 Apr 2015
You've beautifully captured the nightmare dynamics of low self esteem...in extremis! These issues cause so much misery in our world, and this is a sensitive response to it.
She asks if I love her -
Read full commentharder to answer by the day. ...oh...
Posted in Baby