hilary west
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I have 245 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 436260 times
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162 of my 1,296 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 164 votes

You keep up the rhythm and
Posted on Thu, 25 Mar 2021
You keep up the rhythm and rhyme so well in this poem, Luigi. I am not so keen on this new tech stuff : Ipods, streaming, it's all Greek to me !
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in A Lack of Application(s)
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 26 Mar 2021
Hi Rhiannon,
Lovely little poem. I liked the image of the spoke of a wheel and the picture too to illustrate it. Nice and whimsical !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Looking down on the city’s departures …
Hi Jenny,
Posted on Sat, 27 Mar 2021
Hi Jenny,
Loved the section about the dormice and then the beautiful garden imagery : super !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Pastiche
Hi Luigi,
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Hi Luigi,
Great rhyming in this poem, Luigi. It rattled along at a pace and worked very well !!!
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Hurdles
Hi Jenny,
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Hi Jenny,
This was full of evocative imagery and quite sensual in its nature. An enjoyable read !!!
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Escape To Freedom
Hi Jenny,
Posted on Wed, 10 Mar 2021
Hi Jenny,
It's nice to look back, isn't it. Sounds like an entrancing place, well described !!!
Best Wishes,
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Lydford Gorge
Loved your musicality in this
Posted on Thu, 31 Dec 2020
Loved your musicality in this, Jenny. I felt I was in a symphony of dreams !
Happy New Year
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Symphony Of Emotions
Hi,
Posted on Mon, 04 Jan 2021
Hi,
What good advice this is, Rhiannon. Let's hope many will take it on board!
Happy New Year,
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Packing
A very nice portrait of
Posted on Sun, 20 Dec 2020
A very nice portrait of Christmas. It was an enjoyable read.
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Christmas Time
Hi onemorething,
Posted on Sun, 20 Dec 2020
Hi onemorething,
I liked this idea of writing about a paintng and making an accompanying poem. I once did this with a story I wrote. You did it terribly well and it had an arcane ring about it !
Hilary
Read full commentPosted in Morning
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