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Chet and the Prisoners - 2

Toyo Ft Lincoln February 12, 1942 First of all, I must say who I am, and what I am doing in this awful place, called Ft. Lincoln in the frozen north...

Chet and the Prisoners - 1

Preface This is a fictionalized story based on known information of several men wholived in Bismarck, ND during the first half of 1942. They might...

Conned? 5

You thought this story was over, didn't you? Well so did I, until I opened my computer on Tuesday morning to find an email from my bank, telling me I...

Conned? 4

Sunday I was expecting another of the team, this time, the man who would actually install the system. He came late, but only by three hours or so...

Conned? 3

Saturday was the day for the man who needed to clean out my currentheating system, to get ready for the new product, due to be installed on Sunday...

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402 of my comments have received 406 Great Feedback votes

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Hi Lisa

Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014

Hi Lisa

When I first started reading this chapter, I thought it was a previous one - but of course her life was very repetitive. And her need for companionship seems to have outweighed her common sense about the whole thing. I guess she...

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Posted in Ch23: Stolen June 16th-28th

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Hi Tina

Posted on Sat, 17 May 2014

Hi Tina

What a beautful tribute to your daughter. So often it is that our children know much more about things than we do, and appreciate them in different ways. I really was moved by this piece.

Jean

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Posted in These My Daughter Taught Me

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Hi Bee,

Posted on Tue, 13 May 2014

Hi Bee,

I too could feel your anticipation and then your disappointment, but it must have been lovely seeing your daughter again after all those years. And there will be more occasions, I am sure.

Jean

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Posted in Gift

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Hi Rhiannon

Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2014

Hi Rhiannon

Nice little Christmas/Easter poem. Easter is the first Sunday after the first full moon after the spring equinox.

Jean

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Posted in Did Jesus die in March or April?

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Hi Elsie

Posted on Thu, 20 Mar 2014

Hi Elsie

Sorry it's taken me so long to find this to reply to. I sort of thought you had stopped writing, and never looked to see if it actually happened.

It is certainly a very interesting poem - and cleverly done. I can't say I...

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Posted in IP Babylon was built on Grain

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Hi again Seth

Posted on Sun, 09 Mar 2014

Hi again Seth

I like the idea that you are introducing the characters one at a time - giving the reader a good bit of background information before the character emerges in person.

But I find Becky a bit of a problem. You are...

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Posted in Advent Awakening 3

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Hi Linda

Posted on Fri, 28 Feb 2014

Hi Linda

Good to have a recap of the previous bits of the story. But this is ending up such a bloody mess. I can't see a happy ending in sight.

 

Jean

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Posted in WHITHER THOU GOEST 11 - LENA'S STORY

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Hi Bee

Posted on Thu, 27 Feb 2014

Hi Bee

I wasn't expecting that ending. But I know the feel of buying things you don't want and need to make you feel better when there is something that upsets you that you can't do anything about. 

Jean

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Posted in Crash

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Hi Elsie

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2014

Hi Elsie

This is a wonderful poem. It starts out gentle and gradually becomes a little worrying, then it goes into the scary bits, and then back again to the gentle. I'll bet it was well received at your reading.

Jean

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Posted in Fantasy - Unexpected Journey

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HI Linda

Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2014

HI Linda

Just a couple of things an American is unlike to say - "ring" somebody. You'd call. "booked" in at a motel - you'd check in.

Still enjoying the story.

Jean

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Posted in WHITHER THOU GOEST 7 - ADRIAN'S STORY PART 1

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