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Toyo Ft Lincoln February 12, 1942 First of all, I must say who I am, and what I am doing in this awful place, called Ft. Lincoln in the frozen north...
You thought this story was over, didn't you? Well so did I, until I opened my computer on Tuesday morning to find an email from my bank, telling me I...
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Hi Lisa
Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014
Hi Lisa
When I first started reading this chapter, I thought it was a previous one - but of course her life was very repetitive. And her need for companionship seems to have outweighed her common sense about the whole thing. I guess she...
What a beautful tribute to your daughter. So often it is that our children know much more about things than we do, and appreciate them in different ways. I really was moved by this piece.
I too could feel your anticipation and then your disappointment, but it must have been lovely seeing your daughter again after all those years. And there will be more occasions, I am sure.
I like the idea that you are introducing the characters one at a time - giving the reader a good bit of background information before the character emerges in person.
I wasn't expecting that ending. But I know the feel of buying things you don't want and need to make you feel better when there is something that upsets you that you can't do anything about.
This is a wonderful poem. It starts out gentle and gradually becomes a little worrying, then it goes into the scary bits, and then back again to the gentle. I'll bet it was well received at your reading.
Hi Lisa
Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014
Hi Lisa
When I first started reading this chapter, I thought it was a previous one - but of course her life was very repetitive. And her need for companionship seems to have outweighed her common sense about the whole thing. I guess she...
Read full commentPosted in Ch23: Stolen June 16th-28th
Hi Tina
Posted on Sat, 17 May 2014
Hi Tina
What a beautful tribute to your daughter. So often it is that our children know much more about things than we do, and appreciate them in different ways. I really was moved by this piece.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in These My Daughter Taught Me
Hi Bee,
Posted on Tue, 13 May 2014
Hi Bee,
I too could feel your anticipation and then your disappointment, but it must have been lovely seeing your daughter again after all those years. And there will be more occasions, I am sure.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in Gift
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2014
Hi Rhiannon
Nice little Christmas/Easter poem. Easter is the first Sunday after the first full moon after the spring equinox.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in Did Jesus die in March or April?
Hi Elsie
Posted on Thu, 20 Mar 2014
Hi Elsie
Sorry it's taken me so long to find this to reply to. I sort of thought you had stopped writing, and never looked to see if it actually happened.
It is certainly a very interesting poem - and cleverly done. I can't say I...
Read full commentPosted in IP Babylon was built on Grain
Hi again Seth
Posted on Sun, 09 Mar 2014
Hi again Seth
I like the idea that you are introducing the characters one at a time - giving the reader a good bit of background information before the character emerges in person.
But I find Becky a bit of a problem. You are...
Read full commentPosted in Advent Awakening 3
Hi Linda
Posted on Fri, 28 Feb 2014
Hi Linda
Good to have a recap of the previous bits of the story. But this is ending up such a bloody mess. I can't see a happy ending in sight.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in WHITHER THOU GOEST 11 - LENA'S STORY
Hi Bee
Posted on Thu, 27 Feb 2014
Hi Bee
I wasn't expecting that ending. But I know the feel of buying things you don't want and need to make you feel better when there is something that upsets you that you can't do anything about.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in Crash
Hi Elsie
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2014
Hi Elsie
This is a wonderful poem. It starts out gentle and gradually becomes a little worrying, then it goes into the scary bits, and then back again to the gentle. I'll bet it was well received at your reading.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in Fantasy - Unexpected Journey
HI Linda
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2014
HI Linda
Just a couple of things an American is unlike to say - "ring" somebody. You'd call. "booked" in at a motel - you'd check in.
Still enjoying the story.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in WHITHER THOU GOEST 7 - ADRIAN'S STORY PART 1
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