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My writer friend Mike had these neighbours living across the street from him. The neighbours were husband and wife and they had a couple of kids and...
On the 1 st of May 2134, his wife came to say goodbye. Spatchcocked on the private hospital bed, unruly wires and tubes grew from his jaundiced flesh...
Fortunately I have never been charged at by cows but it's a fear of mine when out walking. I think you've captured the need to have respect for them here. Choice of language and the rhythm both work well here.
Immersive
Posted on Fri, 16 Feb 2024
Very rich writing that floods the senses and a hammer blow for the final few sentences.
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An important piece
Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024
Really important , on point message. Hard to argue any differently.
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Great Poem
Posted on Tue, 04 Mar 2025
Fortunately I have never been charged at by cows but it's a fear of mine when out walking. I think you've captured the need to have respect for them here. Choice of language and the rhythm both work well here.
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Enjoyed This
Posted on Mon, 14 Apr 2025
The book sounds like it will be fun. I love this type of humour.
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