Lille Dante

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I have 44 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 31033 times and 63 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2 of my 19 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 3 votes

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My collections

My stories

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Threnodies

Do you feel better now...?

I... I... I... I...

Dem bones, dem bones...
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Poem of the week

Colouring Outside The Lines

Gifted with a colouring book...
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Poem of the week

Sonnet for Philbey

I used to hold her in one hand...
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"Forever Autumn"

With apologies to Justin Hayward, but it did spoil the moment.
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2 of my comments have received 3 Great Feedback votes

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It must have been convincing.

Posted on Sun, 04 Feb 2018

It must have been convincing.

I was distracted by a couple of members of the audience looking at their phones during my performance.

Am I being that boring or self indulgent? I wondered.

Turned out they were Googling me and...

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Posted in 'The Wages of Sin', Unplugged

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Hi there.

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2016

Hi there.

I enjoyed the short, impressionistic strokes of your poem. It felt immersive and claustrophobic.

However, I hope you won't mind a newbie's observation that the third section 'moist' does not appear to flow thematically...

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Posted in The imperative (Poetry Monthly)