monodemo
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I have 442 stories published in
17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 232867 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Thunder in paradise (part 4)
Carol woke from a restless sleep and looked at the mesmerising view from the bed. The sun was rising, its rays dancing on the ripples of the clear...
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The Click
There she sits. She sits and she waits for her time to come. Every Wednesday she waits for the people on high to descend upon her to tell her if they...
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Thunder in paradise (part 3)
As each of them looked at each other they knew that one of two things; either Lucas was behind both murders or there was a killer amongst them. No...
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Thunder in paradise (part 2)
As Mike wandered the beach going into every hut, he knew to be occupied he realised that each and every one of his ‘guests’ were awake watching the...
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Thunder in paradise (part 1)
Mike Reid, of Reid and associates, was quite aware that his employees were doing their darndest to help make his law company the best in town. He had...
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