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The perils of living on an

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

The perils of living on an island, especially Neville's. This brilliantly written and deeply wry story is our Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter.

 

(Ross - I hope the image is ok. Feel free to change if not. It's from...

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Posted in Take it Back

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This has such a wistful

Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021

This has such a wistful sadness to it. 

'a brook bird song

hardly audible

beneath perpetual

flowing river'

Lovely lines. 
 

Rachel :)

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Posted in Silent Lament

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Ah well, you conjure it up

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Ah well, you conjure it up very well. (And not to labour my point like a pedant...I should have explained myself better, I wondered if it should be gazed at, or gazed upon, rather than just gazed - but, as I said, could just be me!)

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Posted in Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

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Lovely, Paul. Really

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021

Lovely, Paul. Really evocative. (BTW - is 'gazed an ivory tomb' - could just be me.)

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Posted in Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)

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Yes, the promise of Spring

Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021

Yes, the promise of Spring just around the corner. A nice reminder.

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Posted in Drifting On The Muse

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This offers an enchanting

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

This offers an enchanting escape and leaves us a secret forest to imagine. Quite lovely, and is Pick of the Day. Do share on Facebook and Twitter. 

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Posted in A Secret Forest

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Lovely. Love whispering smoke

Posted on Thu, 28 Jan 2021

Lovely. Love whispering smoke and the idea of life being translucent. You painted the picture so well to take us on a little excursion from everything. :)

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Posted in A Secret Forest

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The juxtaposition of an

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

The juxtaposition of an ending with beginning and renewal, dark and light, makes this a real pleasure to read. This return to colour is our Pick of the Day. Please do share on Facebook and Twitter. 
 

Paul - do let me know too if you...

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Posted in The Haunted Fort of Bhangarh

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Lovely, and I love the

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

Lovely, and I love the simplicity of the snapshot. Rachel :)

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Posted in The Blue Jay

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Beautiful images, Jenny, love

Posted on Mon, 14 Dec 2020

Beautiful images, Jenny, love this one. :) 

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Posted in Langdale Pikes In Winter

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