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Wolf moon

Very beautiful last night.
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Poem of the week

There is hope here

This is not strictly what was requested for IP. I imagine it was more a 'fresh start' request than this, but I latched onto the word hope so I'm still claiming it meets the IP criteria...
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Poem of the week

You can’t cling to something once it has gone.

The photo is of a splendid fairy wren. I was doing a bit of reading about them and then read all the updates for this morning about the bushfires and found the koala videos very upsetting.
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Wood Mouse

Not very festive at all.

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507 of my comments have received 550 Great Feedback votes

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Very lovely Di, you have

Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2020

Very lovely Di, you have captured all the different moments of a walk so well: wonder, excitement, sadness, light and shade. Rachel :)

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Posted in june 20th

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A lot to take in, as

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

A lot to take in, as airyfairy said, but things that stand out straight away - the outsider does not yearn to be tolerated and inclusion is not the same as belonging. Rachel :)

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Posted in Outsiders, and the clubhouse door

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I love the bombardment of

Posted on Sun, 14 Jun 2020

I love the bombardment of this. Quite a walk. I enjoyed it very much. Has some great lines too, 'the sweat of labour, the sweat of love' just for one. Rachel :)

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Posted in This year's walk...(08)

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Love this one, Luigi. So sad

Posted on Thu, 11 Jun 2020

Love this one, Luigi. So sad that he's not here anymore. Like the reflection on mortality. Rachel x

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Posted in Independence

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I have been back to read this

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020

I have been back to read this wonderful poem a number of times for the light and shade in its imagery and metaphor, and for how it reads as if it is full of secrets. It is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Please do share if you like it...

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Posted in Cinderella river

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I love the idea of the wind

Posted on Thu, 04 Jun 2020

I love the idea of the wind as a vagabond of change and the water of goodwill. Some lovely images. Rachel :)

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Posted in Gliding Through Woods

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Such beautiful, grief-laden,

Posted on Sat, 30 May 2020

Such beautiful, grief-laden, weighty lines in your poem as well as images. And as well as being very erudite. I know very little about Lacan. I haven't processed the horror of what I think and feel about what happened to George Floyd yet. I found...

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Posted in #BLM

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Ha ha. That's the perfect

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020

Ha ha. That's the perfect solution, Luigi! I think I will take your advice and when people ask what the rattling noise is coming from them, I'll plead ignorance. Rachel x

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Posted in Anger

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This is a sweet idea, I

Posted on Wed, 27 May 2020

This is a sweet idea, I suppose having just posted a poem about anger that listening to them would do me good! Rachel :)

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Posted in Look For The Good

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I have really enjoyed your

Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020

I have really enjoyed your use of language in your latest poems. Nice images here too, as Jenny said. Rachel :)

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Posted in The Ocean

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