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There is hope here

By onemorething on Wed, 08 Jan 2020

This is not strictly what was requested for IP. I imagine it was more a 'fresh start' request than this, but I latched onto the word hope so I'm still claiming it meets the IP criteria...

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To the belly of an osprey

By onemorething on Sat, 04 Jan 2020

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You can’t cling to something once it has gone.

By onemorething on Fri, 03 Jan 2020

The photo is of a splendid fairy wren. I was doing a bit of reading about them and then read all the updates for this morning about the bushfires and found the koala videos very upsetting.

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Wood Mouse

By onemorething on Tue, 31 Dec 2019

Not very festive at all.

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There is a sad hollowing to

Posted on Thu, 28 May 2020

There is a sad hollowing to this and it's perfectly circled for me in the 'there, there'. Full of vulnerability, of subject and writer.

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I have really enjoyed your

Posted on Sun, 24 May 2020

I have really enjoyed your use of language in your latest poems. Nice images here too, as Jenny said. Rachel :)

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So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :

Posted on Thu, 21 May 2020

So glad you enjoyed, Luigi. :) I always revel a little when you use words like refined and elegant as I am neither refined nor elegant as a person, but I do enjoy the reflection of the compliment about my poem! Thanks for reading it. Rachel x

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I love the personal elements

Posted on Wed, 13 May 2020

I love the personal elements of this that emphasise its sadness somehow. Very moving indeed and beautifully written.

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I agree, the philosophical

Posted on Tue, 12 May 2020

I agree, the philosophical drift of this from one thought leading to another and deepening made me feel sad and hopeful alternately. Love potential and experience, I wonder if it could be calculated like an equation for being. And yes,...

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Sounds very scary Jenny. I'm

Posted on Sun, 10 May 2020

Sounds very scary Jenny. I'm sure they can feel like they are terrorising an area when they do this. Rachel :)

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Totally brilliant. Love it. :

Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2019

Totally brilliant. Love it. :)

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Seeds of suspicion is such a

Posted on Sat, 09 May 2020

Seeds of suspicion is such a clever take on the IP. Great. Rachel x