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You can’t cling to something once it has gone.

The photo is of a splendid fairy wren. I was doing a bit of reading about them and then read all the updates for this morning about the bushfires and found the koala videos very upsetting.
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Wood Mouse

Not very festive at all.
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Image is from Wikipedia, not wikimedia commons, but I think it's ok as I don't think a shape is owned by anyone.

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464 of my comments have received 495 Great Feedback votes

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I think this is wonderful. :)

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2020

I think this is wonderful. :)

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Posted in Imagine if we Didn't Feel Pain

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I like the fact that it's

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

I like the fact that it's clear that it is you doing all the watching by the end of the poem.

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Posted in A very scary character

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I like the vulnerability that

Posted on Mon, 02 Mar 2020

I like the vulnerability that weaves through this. It's a really neatly written piece of nostalgia because it works its way back from a present trigger. A good reminder of why we should all #be kind. Is it wrong too that I especially like the...

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Posted in On the Spectrum

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I like how sparse this is, it

Posted on Sun, 23 Feb 2020

I like how sparse this is, it gives the feeling of nightmare and fear well and benefits from a little freedom from rhyme. :)

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Posted in Nightmares

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This is excellent. A perfect

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020

This is excellent. A perfect poem for the picture. Love the use of rot and rancid and putrid, really conjured up the stink of it all. And the picture is amazing too. :)

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Posted in September 15th 2008

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I like the idea of this. I

Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2020

I like the idea of this. I like the repetition and I like the stark lines. :) 

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Posted in I've forgotten

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Oh god. Imagine the

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

Oh god. Imagine the disappointment. Just a poem. Not a boob in sight. 

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Posted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven

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So sad, sorry for you and

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020

So sad, sorry for you and Frankie. It's a very precious thing, the love between us and our pets. 

 

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Posted in To my Best Friend...(Frankie)

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You're right, now I'm

Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020

You're right, now I'm imagining Boris trying to explain Pluto and Charon to Trump through role play:
 

'But it's my turn to be Pluto, Boris.' 

'Just ferry the dead souls to me, Donald',

Just goes to show too how...

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Posted in Pluto’s ode to Charon

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Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I

Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2020

Ha. Oh dear. I feel like I made you work for it. Pluto is pretty special in its own icy way, isn't it, poor unplaneted thing that it is. I think we should definitely send T and B - Team TB as explorers in a Wallace and Gromit style rocket. Who...

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