I have 5 stories published in
one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 6038 times
and 6 of my stories have been cherry picked. 1 of my 15 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote
I'd be interested to know if anyone thinks I could I make a longer story and reveal more about these characters? Any other comments gratefully recieved. Thanks for reading.
It's a well-worn concept, but I needed to get down my version for some reason. It started as a differemt story, meant to fit in my collection, but ended up as this instead.
A re-edit of the previously published story. Have you ever gone out looking for the 'shopper's high'? How many unsatisfied women have searched for that amazing new thing that promises to transform them, in just one easy passing of coin across palm? This is no cosy Christmas excursion. What does the woman really want and who is the stranger? What is the difference between the woman and the stranger? In two parts due to word count limit. Please read the second part too!
I found this surprisingly
Posted on Mon, 12 Nov 2018
I found this surprisingly moving. A very convincing character.
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