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"Willow's Missing Tail" 6

By Penny4athought on Sat, 29 Oct 2022

Perfidia opened the front door to her home and Chaos strolled in ahead of her and Martha. “I guess he knows he’s home,” Perfidia said with a happy...

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"The Coffee House Spy" 6

By Penny4athought on Sat, 22 Oct 2022

The sun was just climbing in the sky as Brent brewed a strong pot of coffee. He poured the dark brew into two hefty mugs and had just replaced the...

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"Halloween or Samhain"

By Penny4athought on Sat, 15 Oct 2022

Candles burning Dripping wax Jack-o'-lanterns Filled with snacks Darkened pathways Ghostly moon Trick-or-Treaters Coming soon Witches cackle Owls...

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"The Coffee House Spy" 5

By Penny4athought on Sun, 09 Oct 2022

Stacy turned from the window and holstered her gun as Brent walked back into the apartment. “Did you get the license plate?” she asked. “I framed a...

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Movement, so beautifully done

Posted on Thu, 16 Feb 2023

Movement, so beautifully done in your words, taking us from the depth, the soil, the darkness to light, from the seed to the bloom; the emergence of spring. A lovely poem and one I will enjoy reading again.

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The journey through grief is

Posted on Sat, 25 Feb 2023

The journey through grief is a personal one and you move through all the phases of loss in your autobiography. It is a story we all share at one time or another; the loss of someone precious in our life and how we learn to survive without them,...

Posted in Beginning. By MarciaMarcia

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I like the determination to

Posted on Sat, 28 Jan 2023

I like the determination to keep an optimistic outlook in your poem and it's true; it is a choice we make to find the bright spot in our days, but it can be difficult to sustain when times are hard and the belief in a better day is hard to see. ...

Posted in The Goodness In Us Makes Life Worth Living

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Unusual encounter indeed

Posted on Tue, 17 Jan 2023

Unusual encounter indeed Jenny. It is amazing that a swan would want to enter a confined space or a strange object, like a bus unless they’ve evolved and now understand it is a way to get around without flapping wings. Maybe the swans in that...

Posted in Extraordinary Experience On The Bus

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Yes that phrase, "Two

Posted on Fri, 13 Jan 2023

Yes that phrase, "Two midnights in a jar," will never leave my mind and will forever be the perfect definition of darkness. Brilliant! Your poem flows effortlessly and packs a punch at the end. I loved it.

Posted in You Know Who You Are But You Don't

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I had once been in that

Posted on Fri, 06 Jan 2023

I had once been in that position with my elderly dad, it is not easy for them to be away from family and all that is familiar to them; they will deteriorate quickly in a strange environment, like a hospital, or even a rehab. So I was happy to...

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Moving story, showing the

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

Moving story, showing the plight of the children in an unstable marriage; you've highlighted it. How the oldest child had to become the parent and sort out the troubled marriage by forcing her father to admit his choice; very sad and all too true...

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This is an exceptional piece

Posted on Sun, 08 Jan 2023

This is an exceptional piece of writing Paul and I want to do it justice in my comments. First off, it drew me in from the first line; I didn’t feel it was fictional; it felt like I was reading a journal entry because of the realistic flow of...

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Human entitlement knows no

Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022

Human entitlement knows no bounds. Your poetic words poignantly highlight the tragedies caused by man. Your depiction of the dolphin’s plight is terrifying and painful to read in its truth, and makes me wish there was some magic in the world that...

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I have to tell you I'm truly

Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2022

I have to tell you I'm truly enjoying this story and I love it when I see another chapter posted. The characters are likable and believable, I am curious to know what the mother's reasons for leaving her children could be so I'm impatiently...