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A poem to hearld a spring day
Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023
A poem to hearld a spring day's awakening; all the parts fluid, building on the moments and creating a picture in words, as beautiful as a monet painting. I particularly loved your descriptive images in this passage: "and first grafitti...
Your sentiments in this poem reflect, for me, the immortal words of John Lennon:
"Imagine all the people sharing all the world- You may say I'm a dreamer but I'm not the only one - I hope someday you'll join us and the world will live...
You truly need to publish these screwball comedy vignettes. You have the dialogue and scene set down pat; all you need to do is slap it between two book covers.
Eating bugs for beer what a concept, rather disgusting but it made for a very...
Oh my, and now covid to boot? You have had a time of it and I know hospitals are not conducive to sleep, especially if you have to share the sleeping quarters. This has to be so stressful for you and yet your sense of humor remains at the...
It sounds like you could be a Brick Master with the way you describe your enjoyment. My older son loves lego's too and as a child, at the age of 5, he begged for the Pirate Ship. He was so determined and adamant that he could build it that we...
Your humor is intact in this gripping piece of autobiography and that amazes me; it had to have been harrowing when you woke up and realized you were on the floor, and not being able to reach your daughter had to be frightening. I don't know why...
This was beautifully read on Saturday Paul and it is a beautiful read; I'm so glad you've posted it again here. It is well deserving of those golden cherries!
The concrete jungle and the open green pastures; nice depictions of the issues in both dwellings as the city does need more green space and the countryside could use more amenities; although, “their surroundings are real cool" - Enjoyed this...
A poem to hearld a spring day
Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023
A poem to hearld a spring day's awakening; all the parts fluid, building on the moments and creating a picture in words, as beautiful as a monet painting. I particularly loved your descriptive images in this passage: "and first grafitti...
Read full commentPosted in stravaganza
Your sentiments in this poem
Posted on Sat, 22 Apr 2023
Your sentiments in this poem reflect, for me, the immortal words of John Lennon:
"Imagine all the people sharing all the world- You may say I'm a dreamer but I'm not the only one - I hope someday you'll join us and the world will live...
Read full commentPosted in Sowing The Seeds Of Love
You truly need to publish
Posted on Sun, 23 Apr 2023
You truly need to publish these screwball comedy vignettes. You have the dialogue and scene set down pat; all you need to do is slap it between two book covers.
Eating bugs for beer what a concept, rather disgusting but it made for a very...
Read full commentPosted in The Goings On at Ned's
Oh my, and now covid to boot?
Posted on Sat, 08 Apr 2023
Oh my, and now covid to boot? You have had a time of it and I know hospitals are not conducive to sleep, especially if you have to share the sleeping quarters. This has to be so stressful for you and yet your sense of humor remains at the...
Read full commentPosted in Bitty Bsarbie Boob part 3
azure perfumed tapestry...
Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023
azure perfumed tapestry....just lovely!
Read full commentPosted in Bluebell Woods
It sounds like you could be a
Posted on Sun, 09 Apr 2023
It sounds like you could be a Brick Master with the way you describe your enjoyment. My older son loves lego's too and as a child, at the age of 5, he begged for the Pirate Ship. He was so determined and adamant that he could build it that we...
Read full commentPosted in I love Lego!
Your humor is intact in this
Posted on Thu, 06 Apr 2023
Your humor is intact in this gripping piece of autobiography and that amazes me; it had to have been harrowing when you woke up and realized you were on the floor, and not being able to reach your daughter had to be frightening. I don't know why...
Read full commentPosted in BITTY BARBY BOOB, RIP
Cannot imagine living through
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023
Cannot imagine living through those feelings but so glad you came out the other side of that, but sorry you had to go through it at all.
Read full commentPosted in Nothing Concrete
This was beautifully read on
Posted on Mon, 03 Apr 2023
This was beautifully read on Saturday Paul and it is a beautiful read; I'm so glad you've posted it again here. It is well deserving of those golden cherries!
Read full commentPosted in A Requiem for One Man’s Life (Edited and Updated 2023)
The concrete jungle and the
Posted on Tue, 04 Apr 2023
The concrete jungle and the open green pastures; nice depictions of the issues in both dwellings as the city does need more green space and the countryside could use more amenities; although, “their surroundings are real cool" - Enjoyed this...
Read full commentPosted in "15 minute walk to nature for all" aim
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