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I have 216 stories published in 13 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 245795 times and 178 of my stories have been cherry picked.
319 of my 1,353 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 336 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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"Willow's Tail" 25

Perfidia stared at Jon’s retreating figure with apprehension. “What if his pet cat is that midnight menace?” “We’ll find out soon enough if it is.”...
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"Willow's Tail" 24

Perfidia placed a small plate of scrambled eggs in front of Willow and the cat licked her hand. She froze, unsure what it meant. She’d never had a...
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"Willow's Tail" 23

Martha stepped into the bedroom as the memories rose up like lit paper causing a brush fire of emotions she didn’t want to feel. That long ago summer...
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"Willow's Tail" 22

Perfidia walked over and looked at the card with her name on it sitting by Gloria’s entry. “Did you switch them?” she asked Gloria, but not with...
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The house at the end of the cul-de-sac...

Bonnie skipped innocently ahead of her brothers and mother and thought the night was particularly dark and spooky but then it was Halloween and that...
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319 of my comments have received 336 Great Feedback votes

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A perfect poem Jenny; it took

Posted on Sat, 17 Sep 2022

A perfect poem Jenny; it took me to a fairyland filled with beautiful flowers surrounded by whispers of imagination. I love blue bells; their delicate beauty inspires poetry and fairy tales. Congratulations on a well deserved POD.

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Posted in Harebells

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Hello Insert, this poem was

Posted on Sat, 10 Sep 2022

Hello Insert, this poem was more of an autumn in New York memory; there the leaves would slowly change by the end of September to golden, as you drove towards the Island or upstate. September would begin warm, with the last days of summer...

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Posted in "Autumn frame of Mind"

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Well structured,

Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2022

Well structured, introspective poem and relatable matter. The puzzlement of life stumps us all; it can be fragmented, impossible, at times, to piece together its meaning. I did have one suggestion for the ending; I'm not sure you need the last...

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Posted in Life is a puzzle

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The heart and soul of nature,

Posted on Sat, 13 Aug 2022

The heart and soul of nature, its silent communication to us has always been there for those who in a quiet moment listen and feel its life. Your poem is so well versed and thoughtful, reminding us of nature’s spirit; how we need to stay...

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Posted in Contemplation

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I was caught up in this story

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022

I was caught up in this story from the first word of the first paragraph; it walked along the normal and I did not see the supernatural creeping in; such a surprise ending. I am hooked on your story...cannot wait for part two.

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Posted in Charmed (Part One of Two)

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Your poem is effective in its

Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022

Your poem is effective in its vivid picture of where we our planet is unfortunately going. If only we would listen to nature, the cries of vanishing wildlife and learn to protect our habitat, as they protect theirs and if we'd change our ways,...

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Posted in sound escape

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The ritual of burial, the

Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022

The ritual of burial, the pain of loss, the desire to connect with those beyond the veil...relatable sorrow – expressively captured in your poem. Recently, I traveled to where my parents are buried - I stood there and let the reflections of their...

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Posted in Anniversary

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Your poem captures the reader

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

Your poem captures the reader from the start and with the familiar surroundings of the Wizard of Oz; it sets a pace we can all fly in until it drops us into the dark realities of current life here on terra 'not Kansas anymore.' And the last line...

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Posted in Back In Kansas

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Beautiful poem; I am in awe

Posted on Fri, 10 Jun 2022

Beautiful poem; I am in awe of these ferns- ancient seedless plants, millions of years in existence -one of the oldest neighbors in the forest. What tales they could tell if they could. I especially loved your last line's offer of respect....

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Posted in Ferns

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Snippets of recognition in

Posted on Fri, 03 Jun 2022

Snippets of recognition in this but not sure I’m correct in my interpretations.For, Fisher king -is that the DJ in the movie with the homeless man (Robin Williams) who he befriends and whose life he had inadvertently destroyed by previous actions...

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Posted in Kings of Myth and Illusion

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