Philip Sidney
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I have 165 stories published in
5 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 698009 times
and 211 of my stories have been cherry picked.
393 of my 5,296 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 391 votes
Very dark, very readable, the
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014
Very dark, very readable, the odd technical error jars.
Read full commentPosted in Do what thou wilt
From the dreamy days of
Posted on Thu, 18 Sep 2014
From the dreamy days of summer to dreamy snippets from lessons, lovely.
Read full commentPosted in The ABC of Zoe
i'm enjoying this and agree
Posted on Thu, 18 Sep 2014
i'm enjoying this and agree with vera's comments, now we're this far on it would be good to feel a bit closer to your characters.
Read full commentPosted in Progeniture, Ch. 4
A bleak slice of reality,
Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2014
A bleak slice of reality, there is a current of pain that runs through and gives it depth.
Read full commentPosted in Save The Life Of My Child
Another great character. i
Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2014
Another great character. i like the throwaway details, it runs smoothly but has unexpected moments.
Read full commentPosted in The actor's son.
I love it! Will you read it
Posted on Sat, 13 Sep 2014
I love it! Will you read it to a creative writing class? Clever and funny. I especially like Mariana.
Read full commentPosted in I have no sympathy
made my heart constrict.
Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2014
made my heart constrict.
Read full commentPosted in Mother
Dark, sleazy and great
Posted on Tue, 09 Sep 2014
Dark, sleazy and great characterisation.
Read full commentPosted in They work for them
Just had to keep reading this
Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014
Just had to keep reading this, great style, would prefer if it stopped just before the point of death.
Read full commentPosted in F**k Tuesdays
This is such a powerful read,
Posted on Fri, 05 Sep 2014
This is such a powerful read, I feel privileged.
Read full commentPosted in The Science of Fiction
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