Technically Inept

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How can I have more feeling in this scene without making this more cringy?

By Technically Inept on Sat, 28 Jan 2023

It's supposed to be KIND OF emotional, for it's one that marks the start of a change in one of my characters. (Keep expectations low lol) I provide a little bit of context, and then the scene itself. How can I accomplish the goal in the title, or make it better in other ways?

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Jason and Angel Meet

By Technically Inept on Thu, 12 Jan 2023

It's not an actual story. Moreso just a relatively brief introduction to the characters of the "story" in my head. Starts lighthearted, and then get's SLIGHTLY serious at the end. If it wasn't obvious, I am only really starting to get into writing. Any thoughts would be helpful.