thatbillguy

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I have 3 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1695 times 1 of my 3 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1 vote

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Bill Evans

I'm not what I would consider to be an author, but rather a person who likes to write. Everyday I write something. I'm just trying to get better. So, any and all critiques are welcomed. Needed, even.

I look forward to working and playing here!

My collections

No Rest
Short Stories

My stories

I am Winter

By thatbillguy on Thu, 03 Apr 2014

I awoke to a deep chill. Breath rose from me and disappeared as the last bits of heat fled from it. I wiggled down into the covers trying to find a...
Fantasy
Story
Certificate PG

Say Cheese

By thatbillguy on Wed, 12 Mar 2014

“Some people say that photographs steal your soul.” Darryl Martin said adjusting the height of his Bogen tripod. Darryl was especially proud of this...
Horror
Story
Certificate 12

The Karma Loop

By thatbillguy on Wed, 12 Mar 2014

ONE -- The Phone Call The phone call jarred me to my soul. I sat on the edge of the spring lumped bed cradling my head in my hands. I was sweating...
Surreal
Story
Certificate PG

1 of my comments has received 1 Great Feedback vote

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Nice!

Posted on Wed, 12 Mar 2014

I love stories in first person. I always feel like I'm the main character. Sure I was little shocked when I turned into a 14 year old girl, but life is about experience.

 

In all seriousness, I really like the story.  It was easy to...

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