Hiding

By angelicdevilry

Sat, 11 Oct 2008
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the door is closed
my eyes are shut
no more light
i am cut
once again
just like before
dont know why
just hit the floor
rose is dead
thorns are there
sticking out
everywhere
all thats left
is what you see
nothing there
not even me

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Submitted by Ewan on
Please note the posts in the forums and the note on the homepage regarding maximum three posts a day. I admire your enthusiasm, but so many posts from one person swamps the site and the casual reader gives up looking for other people's work. Don't worry, almost everyone has done it (Including me, but not quite on this scale). But think about it; you have posted a swathe of material on one day, how many comments do you think you will get? Regards Ewan

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