"ANGEL FACE"

There is a sweet simplicity about this. One of your very best.

You need ´Pert´in line 8.

I quite agree with Ewan.

Quite magical, this one, Julie;-)

Tina

Sorry i didn't comment last night cavalcaderl - battery problems! This is a lovely poem, well laid out and flowing very nicely. Good stuff! Sarah x

I agree with other comments - this has a lovely tone to it. A gentle sense sadness. Margot

Just wanted to say, many congratulations on your well-deserved cherry, Julie;-)

Tina

Hi Julie. (-: CONGRATULATIONS :-)

This part was my favourite :

"As I look into your beautiful face
The colours of your shawl light up the
this place

The big brown eyes staring at me
maybe your thoughts are wandering
out to sea
of a loved one coming home to you"

Looking forward to more ;-)

Yes, congratulations, Julie! :-)

hi' Jennifer thankyou compliments Cherry, but I do not know anything about The Forum you have mentioned this should go on, I have to work hard to get this all correct julie x

Lovely, gentle story Julie, you bring a warmth to all you post, all the best Lena

New lenchenelf thankyou cherry I had acry.lIke I say just a magazine and of picture like "scribbles"name I did scribble it. what I did. Know I never like to comment encase offending.
julie

Silver-Spun-Sand well no one noticed error.good corrected 'Angel Face ' end line the and this in.We just got back y? been looking something with Cherry on! to wear brooch etc;
See you got cherry very quick well done. Read later.I will try Forum I did so much before! Found in Dictionary meaning,Forum,and stanza. ;) Is that smiley face. Jupiter wants me make one up about him any ideas.Like I tried 'Alphabet'one .Don't know if Jennifer meant thanks should be in Forum, or comments. julie x Now corrected it was a mess. and we been to forum as you said ok' but What is The Body? please,let me know before I can go ahead thankyou julie x

Hi there, Julie;-) It's that smiley face again.

Glad you set things right with Angel Face and I hope you found a nice brooch. I've got one too. Got it on Amazon, actually:-)

As far as your question is concerned about the 'Forum' and 'Comments', I think your thanks should be in the 'Forum'.

Not sure what you mean about 'The Body'. But just guessing...in this kind of situation, it would probably mean 'the major part, the most important part of whatever it was you had written.

Hope this helps.

If not, try again. I'm here to listen and assist, if I can;-)

Julie, I am so pleased for you. That is fantastic. Never give up hope...I think this experience of yours teaches us.

Thank you for letting me know. I am over the moon;-)

Tina x

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hello' sunshine thankyou comment I must read others there so good. julie

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hello whiskey wow shock cherry thankyou comment, I'm reading yours julie.

Hi Thankyou Silver-Spun-Sand and Ewan so much I was getting fed up so I grabbed pen and tried, it was a photo in mag; but can't use others, when I got home I found already called Angel. strange this happens all time to me Title Songs Horses lucky photo names like Lord, Sharp? Silver? some 100-1. in days always looking at ground? the things I found crosses,money.one particular photo I took to betting shop casino machine held Fthr Alans Photo ask win number of birthday same as our daughter and he was born same number and
up it would come? etc now Id buy books market find picture or china to match.and holy ones it is amazing. true "Seek and you shall find" also "All these things will be added unto you"
god bless juliex

New Silver-Spun-Sand -;) Abctales smiley Thanks million*** help and answer. Well, Most of my work has 2nd meanings ie.happenings good and bad Iv'e been there, or can I dentify with others true.Just put name and address inside envelope and reply Queen's Lady in waiting or M.P. and late Princess Diana thrilled.
cut it down not printed properly.
julie (:-x

hello thankyou Ewan and Silver -Spun-Sand recorrected and I looked it up? fingers slipped on keys. well i'm not sure what your all looking for in the contents, any ideas. I don't sit at this all the time. please read Poem "The Mouse"
.some of our groups 16 -90 in all things. I don't come up to scratch! like song
"I can do anything better than you" love them but he is much younger than me according to Hubby and wonderful m daughter
but criticises all time!
julie x

new Silver-Spun-Sand loved all verses, (1) AND (3) pain on earth not afraid to die. Hate funerals Fthr Alan Sharpe took mothers and even phoned on day. always there? I'm sure you get rosey"! Iv'e lost all I had done for you. We have a clever cloggs daughter I Love and he is clever to, one cannot tell them anything.I think must have been fault last night, 3 comments did not go through. "Poppy," and " War." my 3rd time been bad day send to you Sarah now says her battery gone. I had looked up "Silver-Spun-Sand" nothing=Silver Sand=pure sand used gardening so learnt something. and I put details song titles names "The Atmosphere" like my poem etc'etc. "Down by the riverside etc; There's a little green frog"swimming on the water"lost it all my arms on table this is pun on words .so closing now. bless you julie.

Silver-spun-sand
julie says altering this lost it all sorry.
re; copies of work comp; that was returned 2 years later July after taking it into studios we did, with name and address on.Never loose faith!
julie. xx

Cavalcaderl
Loved this .
Took me back to Dublin and a coffee shop with the sweet innocence of life .
Keep it going .
Mcscraic

New mcscraig
Sorry been out.just seen
lovely comment from you
write about the coffee shop!
Thankyou so much.

It's really done in 5 minute
boredom coffee book shop
friend not there!years.
I looked scribbled down,
from mag;tor out page!
but see model celeb:
Charlie's Angels?I think.
as sometimes permission use names!
"jessica Rose" I read now in
"Sorority". Don't know at all?
and beautiful picture so I
surrounded by the shawl,hence
"Angel Face" and low and behold
my 1st Cherry and put in local paper
after month waiting, unusual day before
birthday gone 6th.

It's really very nice.

Hi' Jupiter well difficult gel to-gether glad you like words. Only one at moment for you "Fly Me The Moon" song "Frank Sinatra" and let me play among the stars, um you are all I ever want from Jupiter and Mars sorry memories gone try harder later.got get lunch julie Peace+ if I hit wrong key whoops'rest words beautiful emotion.

"Scribbles" what a great name Julie
says as this is what I can do now,as he says carry a pen and paper and scribble things down.
Thankyou so much little words that have developed so much for me and to do. From a magazine photo made up.
"Angel Face" we all have one.
julie x

This was a nicely descriptive poem. I think you've taken quite a journey, but it's worth the effort.
It was engaging and atmospheric !

new Hilary west
Thankyou lovely comment
means so much to me.
Must read more of yours.
Yes I have truly in all.
I could see she was lovely
but didn't know celebrity
until I raed page I taken when
I got home, so tried it around the
shawl? and imagination crept in.I must
say I amzed myself,but reading Abctales
and all work,great help and Editor tCook
AbcTales Tony,and his help,and particularly
some to many mention on here!to.
julie x

Hi julie,

just found this poem, it's absolutely beautiful,
you have written with such grace and magic, I
really loved reading this one.

Jenny.

new skinner_jennifer
Hi! jenny, just seen lovely comments
on my very very first poem. I was tickled pink!
Wow! again another lovley compliment,coming from
a good writer like you,love mysticical poems and
stories. Just lost all the comment to you. Tired hit
wrong keys, spell wrong,unyet I know mainly how to spell! Thanks so much for going back on my work!
I am thrilled when I see that and you have taken the time to read. As I put just now,went wrong! I was waiting for friend's in Border's coffe shop,one in
wheelchair now? And embarrassed sit on my own,all there,so picked up magazine lovely photo in, previous
AbcTaler 'Scribble' mentioned carrid pen,so jotted bit down,got home and read it was 'Jessica Rose' so
changed into the shawl she was wearing, and hence the title. It was my very very first cherry! I was so
overjoyed, especially,as my Ray drew one on,mucking about, then it appeared.
Well all being well off,to London weds:
Plus read not done anywhere long time!
Thankyou so much for reading this.
Have a good day.
julie xx
Are you going?

Hi julie,

no sorry I won't beable to make it.
My partner works nights and there is no way I would
travel up on the train on my own at night, a bit to
old and nerves on my own as well.

But I hope it all goes well and really hope the
reading goes well, I'm sure you'll be great.

Take care.

Jenny.

new skinner_jennifer
Sorry! you can't make it.
Loved to met you! Plus could have read
your good work. Maybe another one then?
I know what like someone be on nights.
Awful! and a baby so young then!
Well I can only go London,if Ray take me.
My area for me is re-stricted for years.
If he changes his mind I've had it!
He doesn't do ro read any my so called poems!
Yes,night time around is getting dodgy!
Go on your much younger than me!
Have a good day.
Not bad if waits for me,as 6ft tall,
and me 5ft 5' titch!
yep! now two divans,owing crushed once!
And you take care!
thanks julie x