OH! YOUNG MAN DO COME IN WITH MY DAUGHTER SO FAIR
HAVE YOU BEEN WANDERING ALONG IN THAT LONG DRESS?
PLUS YOUR FELLOW HAS A WIG? ON WHAT A MESS
I HAVE PUT THE CLOTH ON MOTHER DID YOU WANT ME TO FIND SOME OTHER?
SO YOUV!E BEEN TO A BALL THEN LOST YOUR WAY
HOW LOVELY TO SEE YOU BOTH AGAIN
PUT YOUR LUGGAGE IN THE HALL
AND SIT DOWN BY THE FIRE
LET!S CHAT ABOUT YOUR HEARTS !DESIRES
IT ENDED UP THEY HAD A ROW
AND WANTED TO BE DRESSED UP
THEY FORGOTTEN WHAT IT WAS ALLL ABOUT NOW
"WHAT IS" WEALTH AND RICHES" THEY BOTH SAID
LET!S HAVE A CUP OF TEA AND BISCUITS
TURN OUT THE LIGHT ? AND GO TO BED.xx
Comments
Jupiter | June 13, 2009 - 13:55
Hi Cavalcaderl
There are some enjoyable bits in this for me :-)
I liked these rhymes :
"PUT YOUR LUGGAGE IN THE HALL
AND SIT DOWN BY THE FIRE
LET!S CHAT ABOUT YOUR HEARTS !DESIRES"
and
"WHAT IS" WEALTH AND RICHES" THEY BOTH SAID
LET!S HAVE A CUP OF TEA AND BISCUITS
Keep it up ;-)
Silver Spun Sand | June 13, 2009 - 14:26
Nice one, Cavalcaderl. Enjoyed this a lot.
pinda | June 13, 2009 - 16:27
Nice work mate.
Really liked this verse "PUT YOUR LUGGAGE IN THE HALL
AND SIT DOWN BY THE FIRE
LET!S CHAT ABOUT YOUR HEARTS !DESIRES"
Carry on the good work
Cavalcaderl | August 16, 2009 - 07:20
Hello! PINDA Thanks "Gee" No it;s writing group I go Homeless and I take PART READ THEIR SCRIPTS ETC. ALL different people. YES I AM Christian God done so much for me sorry. But Kind comments GO along way with all of them bringing out their talents in all kind of things.New all these commas, dots, and words just have a go. SOME ARE LIFE. SOME IMAGINATIVE. I am GOBSMACKED MY 1st compliment Jennifer. it can mean so much people. OH I AM FEMALE. just reading others works did I say as O.A.P. paid for 3 PUB: CO. you do 3. so many words and lines have count it all. all on hear now on Abctales one only pays for comp; god, then gradually put on my works tried to do.
But as new was very hard to understand etc; and comments to do right sensitive way.
julie cavalcader x
julie x