THE PUFFING TRAIN

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The puffing train was coming
along the track radishes
poking out of people's sacks

bees buzzing and spring on the way
little lambs bleating baa!

the train is puffing smoke coming
round the corner a child is waving out
the window
the billowing clouds of white
passing over

the green fields are flashing by
the branches of the trees bowing
there heads by the weight
of the white flakey snow

brown and white rabbits bouncing
and scurrying around with sheer
de-light
before the night is drawing in

shooting stars are sparkling
one by one as the waning moon
is up high.

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Comments

Cavalcaderl | August 16, 2009 - 05:25

Don't be like the Puffing Train
exercise get out and see life
and nature again!

Larkin Williamson | October 23, 2009 - 21:18

I read...I smiled...thank you! :)

Cavalcaderl | November 26, 2009 - 15:21

new Larkin Williamson
well I am new hence getting
it to-gether.thankyou comment.
yes' I laughed a bit after doing it too.
all the best and must read your's.
julie x cavalcader (:-

Nolan | April 4, 2010 - 21:00

My car also smokes but I feel it’s old enough.

Cavalcaderl | April 8, 2010 - 23:37

new Nolan
Thanks comment,
could be engine!trouble.
Iv'e heard once,we are like
engines,parts go have had it.
j

Luly Whisper | July 24, 2010 - 20:11

Not sure how the sacks of radishes fit into it.