'When I Was Young'

New skinner_jennifer wow! thanks for reading, good job mum and dad not alive! Hah! hah! Then worked couple stanzas of the cat 'Jazz' but added more! Which is really how his antics are now? Cos so long. Approx: 600. So first going make it into like different scenes. Or as mention could cut down the cat few verses. So part true! present and past. And of course shop's now have basque's hanging outside on dummy models. I look! My mum always trim things with fur for me,as a child! feel so old? Now all is coming back into fashion! and rings she did put over her gloves. Never swore either of them,or did she wear any low dresses if had any at all. Or basque. Only bright yellow cami knicker's,won't tell you that bit, left it out of one of mine! I wanted it be funny? Brighton and Hove paper says,Britains happiest poeple voted. I may cut down letter to you,and alter photo back? Re; TALK TALK it was in a 'Metro' paper? So pleased you got something out of it! You are my first reply. I couldn't get poem to rhyme. Have a good day! "Bring me sunshine in your smile" julie x

New MistakenMagic Hello,Magic,hope your well! Hectic week! Only tried one for comp; just for writing mainly. Your kind acceptional comment, after write like you! And 'Silver-Spun-Sand and so many! Can;t believe, all happenings, and acceptional night 'Wheatsheaf' missed you! I have to be in a good mood,finger's and mind! After Editor's wonderful mention, on 'FREEDOM' I try for fun! three after 'Cherries! Omg! And good luck to you and 'Silver-Spun-Sand' in the comp; and all too! I knew had to try and keep up too 'The Editor's great mention! And last night too! And 'Blightersrock' signing wonderful words,not expecting! in his amazing story, and photos,"Of Course You Can Meet The Queen'. Sent by post it was like telepathy! I read his story on AbcTales great,mention neighbour's cat,in this picture of his cat in bed! hadn't received email as left London. Ray went missing from room! just before read I met Tony don bar,chat! as Ray not in bar or eating! And spoke nosiy went outside chat! he assured me Ray be back! So didn't get meet all round table, till end. Editor's speech amazing AbcTales and writer's,mind you I couldn't get Ray get 'Snowball' drink! So asked Lemonade,gone before could think lager lemonade.lemonade on own,gassy and fizzy one can blurp! before reading,so asked him change! get Lager or Shandy more lemonade in. It was pint of bloody beer! When home told me went to burgher outside,not knowing where was or where! Oh! bar he said had no 'Vodka' so at first went lemonade! memory men't Lager or shandy, but Ray gone already! Loved you to been there and read and meet to! nine of us read. Great evening bit tipsy, fresh air before left! awful. I wanted this poem, some is true! some is past and cat is the present,couldn't do it. Then I scribble more of cat,wonder if too much mentioned.But made up on descriptive side mum and dad. Checked¬ spelling not always dictionary by my side! Then thought! maybe make in two scenes! So will be open to advise please! Thanyou so much support and many on AbcTales. 'Editor T.cook (Tony) Patience! advice correction! 'Silver-Spun-Sand,Blighter'srock (Richard) 'Beeme' 'Pinda' 'Skinner_jennifer' 'Nolan' 'Oldpesky' so many can mention,by your great author's and poet's abled me, to read an help to do mine! Thankyou and those not mentioned. Come to the next 'Wheatsheaf'. julie cavalcaderl xx And some made up.

new Silver-Spun-Sand Hi Tina,sorry bit long (Letter) Wow! my goodness gracious me! What! great comment from superb writer! I answered MistakenMagic, first,comment and to you next one,your name with so many helped me and support Editor.cook (Tony) help patience advice, and many other's. Editor 'John Wilks'. Silver-Spun-Sand, Beeme,Jenny,Jennifer,MistakenMagic, Nolan,Richard blightersrock so many!of commenting too! ideas. but while out room! or dressing gown cuffs! caught lost it all,Computer's going into capitals type in middle of words,have to delete,start again! or switch off Ray says and wait,or sluggish! and slow like me! re-trying find magazine cut out photo,of a tree or something,you mentioned, in one of your excellent poems. I can't find! Comment to you gone! It was leaves pale green maybe tree,was it 'Accadia' pale green photo, leaves shimmying down on a glass like feathers on a parrot! and black centre like an eye! beautiful. Not mean't be comp; was fun of trying,and all your wonderful help and support, and Editor t.cook (Tony) as mentioned on MistakenMagic patience and advice,and mention on 'FREEDOM' ones three cherries! after, and short one 'Russett' Leaves' and from 'Lets Start Again' with me 'Sailor' about 'Jack Tar'. Long one of late 'Pindas' FREEDOM Quite long one,Tony said yes,ok go ahead. No mic that night! Tripped on steps going out,new shoes but flat heel, could been the shandy! nearly landed by tony Editor and Blightersrock,insertponceyfyre foot slid ove two steps, new with small flat heel! Could been the shandy I mean pint ridiculous! I sipped at first Ray taken some said when I read,by evening I had finished it? Now gone backwards bit! Not on mum and dad both not alive,never like that anyway,or my dad. Then put bits,in see basque's outside shops hanging! plus couldn't get into prose anything! Some in pass, cat is present. Maybe should gone into two scenes,or cut out extra added of 'Jazz' cat. But wanted more fun! Put if Editor (Tony) thinks should be,or any ideas anyone will do! I also said love your writing of your garden,flowers, animals and birds. And memories. Glad you remember winkles and shrimps! can't recall man coming round us,only for sharpening black old ice skates! and knives those times. I also named you and all supporter's mainly by there work,helps me. Not that I answer in right manner or maybe recieve in same way! I know what I mean, have to be quiet,work computer, do this. Then mind and finger's work well together! But you can do prose so well. Do you remember 'The Blue Brothers' saw with my mum when alive! upstairs of 'Theatre Royal Brighton started of we hidden behind a pillar,huge! bang! and sirens yuck! I got up ready go,but all part of scene. Still have programme. Do your remember 'Oxes' head think pop! would cook! and tripe! in a cupboard then looked awful! Someone mentioned band used saucepan lids ect; I remember three brother's and friend, using washboard,poker on hearth for beat,singing 'Up On The Roof'. And other things used. Resting to-day. Bit tipsy going back! Wish you too! all the luck! in the world! In your entries for the competition. So funny! at end evening everyone I couldn't hear! I turned my head whisper! and talk to me! Hope meet you one day, at 'Wheatsheaf' maybe! Now on May 15th on a Tuesday. If you can look at MistakenMagics comment, you will see all names and Editor t.cook (Tony) support help advice! and your's support and help to me and those named and those comment,and by reading all writer's works when can. Resting to-day! Did say maybe get a coach! laid on to someone some,as want to come,to far away! 'Yorkshire' Scotland so on thought! or ' can't afford train fare! Free to us as Ray x b/Rail worker,daughter doesn't get it! now. Saves money for us! Tripped on steps going out,after going down stairs, could been shandy,new shoes velcro rain,bit heel flat or shandy! nearly landed into Tony,Richard and Insertponceyfyre. But foot is ok1 Repeated myself so giving up till to-morrow! Any spelling mistakes forgive tired to-day. Foot was ok. have a good week-end. take care! julie cavalcaderl and Ray! 'Cacklecader' laugh Editor call me sometmes good! Ray does saving on computer,and a copies,and putting on photo on beginning! Tell me something show me,till I'm blue in the face, if don't grasp! can't do. if computer goes odd! Going into middle words cpitals,so Ray says switch off,re; switch wait re-load protect' carry on! lot to remember. I read 'FREEDOM' long one on late 'Pinda' one of three got all cherries! 'later and great mention by Editor knew have work hard on work live up to it! 'Russett Leaves' a cherry! garden colours and cat! Yes,have repeated but leave it in. 'Russett Leaves' chose yers back! and one from 'Let's Start again book I had book there! re; "Jack Tar a sailor". Which! Editor t.cook (Tony) all! Going bed early! Hoem at mid-night! all happy safe! couldn't stop! talking ugh! Part singing on train up escalator fun happened,might write later! odd things happened! 8 carriages long! After exciting night 'Wheatsheaf' and journey home laughter! might write later or comp: and weave it in. have a good week-end. Prayed safe journey all, and bad foggy! and night! and better weather! Can't type to-night! Daughter's calling morning,so can drive hope! Finger's and knee dodgy! health.(MS) Both getting forgetful and Ray,I can only yes and no! Without me trying remember all said! right and wrong! both and her hubby! confusing time. Ray was getting up on day early,let me down,try curling new tongs daughter,didn't. Blown inside out windows tube,wouldn't mattered! much to do! julei cavalcaderl and Ray, sometimes Editor t.cook (Tony) call me 'Cacklecader' makes me laugh! quite like it! take care! bless you with love xx

new oldpesky Hi! Hope your well. Got Blightersrock great book! 'oF course you can meet the Queen'Pictures match story so well. Excellently done! Just had let neighbour's cat in'Jazz' twice in an hour. Come back and 'wailing' cry! like help. So do light magges,love,Ray's very heavy handed, byt last night after me,he stroked him from top itched his back,cat lift his head, so more! new one Ray does,trhough to his tail. Maybe why! come back always has 'Green Eye's'. On his lap now. Purrin.g can't hear not got h/aid in. Mention you lost you mu,yes,so why! not write about it. I found difficult,too bu both are dead now! And did. How are you! No! had hiccups! here,bu jerked both caused problems. And daughter not well,no replies. All ok.now. Made it to 'Wheatsheaf' grand night. Don't rush! around too much. Not so much comp; effort try get right! and pleasure to try. Are you writing your novel. Editor t.cook (Tony) kindly email as not answered Abc one,we both not 100% sure to go. Ray off snooker,and shoulder pulled. And last minute call,say n/home some going,not heard previous,so Ray said go both! Did 2-4pm dashed back bus,train made same time,London 'Wheatsheaf' think bit tipsy on lemonade shandy. Pint Ray got, not much sold food eat! Got lemonade to gas,blurp to read,so changed it he did. Saw Editor Tony downstair as Ray gone missing,worrying me,and kindly went outside cos noise,chat! bi I did,and assure he would be back Ray. At home said, gone to burgher bar outisde never told me,then off again watch snooker tv downstairs. By end evening drank all the 'shandy' opologies some! So been hectic time,Tony hoped I was going,not without Ray,can't and would I be delighted me to read. Did 3 in the end,asking Tony, which ones,chose three cherries! all great readers. Next wheatsheaf May 15th. And after Rich says now,September both on Tuesday got the date somewhere. Daughter and Ray do not read any poems stories I try! yuck! But visted if knew Editor was doing speech' great as he does,she would come. All new got cut down! keep warm. Start writing storie's soon,you must! all the best julie and ray. x

new insertponceyfre Hello! thanks lovely comment. Well just fun,trying to do and get it right. Lovely to see you agin. Have one for the (IP) just correcting, seems on can do a poem,no capital at start Or can use capitals,breaks poem up,do you think! well for me, cos charcter's kind of speaking,backwards and forewards. Hope you are well. Love your style writing. One minute remeber speeach and capitals,next forget where and when.of each stanza. Keep writing please! julie many thanks and to you xx Might try comp; Blackshoes/prawn/sandwich think be my 2nd one. Hve to think proper!

New jennifer Hello! glad you got something out of it,yes,put far too much,mainly all true! That is what! happens now. Editor's t.cook (Tony) help! And all AbcTaler's. Then comment far too long. Very very personal things, can't put on. Never! In all adversity managed all this! The mind get;s baffled to put think all the speech marks in like her coat,coats,can't do. So leave while! Somethings hit me too,but coping thanks. So have to read something nice,before falling asleep! or wakening up,but Ray take me off,if in out fresh air,forget whatever! Got too cut length commenting back down! Have share his computer On the table,goes scatty sometimes,from Capital into alternate non capital and back again. Using dictionary if by my side? Wish you all the best Competition. J x