Runnin to the bus stop
Is when l have a think.
Did l pack my sandwiches
My keys
Something to drink.
It's that time of year for me
to work both day n night.
It's Xmas
shop is heavin
and the panto lights are bright.
Yes, the money's handy
but you never stop or rest.
Shut up, stop the greetin
do your smilin, happy best ..
Ang zi e tti
Published by denni1 on July 1, 2012 - 08:01
Comments
petal | July 1, 2012 - 08:15
Nice outflow! Just a suggestion... It would be better not to have the spellings altered. Loved the title! :)
denni1 | July 1, 2012 - 08:19
What do you meeeen !! ?? Denise
magicdarer | August 30, 2012 - 20:17
I think she means the way you spell is great because it's scottish dialect. Wow. I do like this poem: it shows us how your life is and how work is a means to an end. Shows how hard you work too. x
denni1 | August 30, 2012 - 20:42
Thank you as always for readin my stuff, but do you not tink they meant the opposite, as in, lose the dialect ?? Dx
denni1 | August 30, 2012 - 20:43
I meant, 'think' ..
magicdarer | August 30, 2012 - 21:15
No!!! Never loose it. It is awesome! Well that's my opinion.
denni1 | August 30, 2012 - 21:50
Barrie xx
sunra59 | November 22, 2012 - 13:06
Denise. Hope you weren't already Christmas shopping when you wrote this! sunra59