I met her on a summers
day, in the rain.
Her damp hair had a
smell I'll never forget
We talked, about everything
yet nothing at all.
When she laughed
She threw back her head
and made a noise
that made me smile
and laugh all at
the same time.
She was my world
for what seemed
like a lifetime,
but was only a dribble
in life’s sea of time.
We loved, bred, breathed
until the exhaustion
of life took me over.
She cried, bitter tears
as I left that day
Until then, she’d
never realised
Every hello ends with goodbye.
Comments
hilary west | July 22, 2012 - 22:17
How true. Nicely put!
Mark Heathcote | July 23, 2012 - 03:15
Nicely written! :)
petal | July 23, 2012 - 06:14
Wow! Just loved the flow!
Edenfalls | July 23, 2012 - 07:31
Thank you very much Hilary.
Edenfalls | July 23, 2012 - 07:31
Thanks for the read Mark.
Edenfalls | July 23, 2012 - 07:32
Really appreciated Petal, glad you liked it.
jolono | July 23, 2012 - 10:35
I really liked this EF.
Edenfalls | July 23, 2012 - 20:30
Thank you Jolono.
bonzo | July 23, 2012 - 21:25
Particularly liked the lines:
She was my world
for what seemed
like a lifetime,
but was only a dribble
in life’s sea of time.
Very well constructed.
Edenfalls | July 25, 2012 - 10:18
Thanks bonzo, glad you enjoyed it.