The Lake

Story of the week

By harrietmacmillan

Thu, 15 Nov 2012
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5 comments
 

This story has been removed due to its entry in a competition.

Certificate 12
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Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
fifty miles out to see, just keep going. -- out to sea- only typo spotted in a gripping tale. Enjoyed it from start to finish.

Submitted by sid on
'At least now her body had accumulated to the temperature of the water.'- should that be acclimatised? I thought this brilliantly written

 

Submitted by harrietmacmillan on
Oh no, I thought I had changed that! I had two drafts on the go and obviously it slipped through the net ;) Thanks so much for your comments!

Submitted by tcook on
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Submitted by alex_tomlin on
This is excellent. Really enjoyed it and the way it turned at the end. You've captured the air of innocence almost but not quite ready to grow up. So many well chosen turns of phrase throughout as well. A worthy story of the week.