Shes hiding,
She does'nt want to be found,
She hiding,
And she doesn't make a sound.
Shes hiding,
but where could the little girl be?
Shes hiding,
And no one can see.
Shes hiding,
But all she wants is you,
shes hiding,
I think I'll hide too.
Shes hiding,
All she wants is her Mum,
shes hiding,
Why is she feeling so Glum.
Shes hiding,
When someone is lost and does'nt want to be found,
Shes hiding,
Away from the crowds.
Comments
indigogold | September 14, 2008 - 13:28
comment?
Silver Spun Sand | September 14, 2008 - 16:01
Seeing as you're asking, indigo, I was just about to. My pleasure.
Always the best place to hide - away from crowds.
An effective last line and certainly an engaging poem. The repetition of 'She's Hiding' throughout, works very well.
Tina :-)
Nathan Bednarek | September 14, 2008 - 23:40
I like this. It sounds like I was just reading the lyrics of a song. I agree with Tina on the repetition, it works well with the piece.