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Published by ItsSteveDave on August 10, 2012 - 11:08
from the ABC set A Collection of Nothing In Particular

I need love so badly,
My god do I need it,
But no other has a love for me
That is fulfilling.
It is in the fabric of the Earth,
And undetectable quantum winds,
And places I can't grasp for.

I want my love reflected,
I want just the right words said.
Of course I ask too much,
It's my fault,
So I write.

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Comments

Highhat | August 10, 2012 - 13:00

I think a lot of us feel this way Steve- you can't jump into someone's head, can you? But you are doing right in writing about it- nice poem..

;)Pia

ItsSteveDave | August 10, 2012 - 13:31

Thank you Pia, I haven't seen you much on ABC lately, great to hear from you, and thank you for your lovely comment. Steve.

Richard L. Prov... | August 14, 2012 - 12:00

Steve, you certainly express the feelings of so many. Well done. Richard

ItsSteveDave | August 14, 2012 - 13:36

Thank you Richard, I really appreciate you reading and letting me know what you think. Steve.

badgerdisco | August 17, 2012 - 19:45

Agree with all of the comments here! Great poem.

ItsSteveDave | August 20, 2012 - 16:27

Thanks badgerdisco, I feel I've said this already, but if not, happy days - great screen name!