Beachcomber's Love Song To The Sea

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His sea trilby
tethered with rope,

hair threaded with
underwater green.

His sea breeches,
a silvery shade of brown

(fish-skin perhaps)
washed by coral-fronds.

His sea box containing
seven tiny shells

each dipped and pointed
with a dab of ocean black.

His beach drum, speckled
with fin and claw -

an ocean diviner
a Neptune-dowser,

braised with fish oil
and kelp.

His love song to the sea:
an imitation of regret

a wave-hymn from his
darkest fathoms

for all that has been
consumed and washed ashore.

His loneliness:
starlight on water -

a love of sea and
the intimacy of memory

the wonder he senses
looking out to beyond.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | September 15, 2010 - 10:48

Hi Kib50,
You capture the scene so well.
Enjoyed reading this little ditty.
Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | September 15, 2010 - 12:33

As Jennifer says, a scene - perfectly captured. My favourite lines:-

"His beach drum, speckled
with fin and claw -

an ocean diviner
a Neptune-dowser,"

Tina

Kilb50 | September 15, 2010 - 13:48

Much appreciated! Thanks both!

shoe | September 17, 2010 - 12:22

Lovely images, each couplet concise and perfect.

ScoZen | May 7, 2012 - 20:49

Hello there Kilb50.
Dipping into your tales and picked this one.
Appealed to me as I live overlooking the sea.
I'm positive I have seen him on the beach.
Regards

Kilb50 | May 8, 2012 - 20:21

Many thanks for reading ScoZen. This particular Beachcomber was uncovered in Cornwall!