The house on Judengasse
where she has lived
for ninety six years:
a smart calèche adorned
with blue silk; a footman in blue
livery greets you at the door.
Frail now, she allows me
to kiss her hand, her sons
(those discreet inheritors)
stand not-so-discreetly
to one side. Today memories
are her currency of choice -
"flakes of gold harvested from
life's storm." She stores them
in her cellar, invests on the
future-memory market. "Please"
she says (so charming, still)
"feel free to look around."
A map of the world hangs from a wall;
a bridal wreath is preserved
beneath a cove of glass.
My memories, I say, are precious
and she laughs - assures me of a good
rate of interest.
"Memories are life insurance
to be cashed in old age".
Her sons nod in agreement.
It is true, they say:
our final years
can be a lonely place.
Frau Schnaper and her boys
are the bankers of the world,
blessed with the gift of transmutation,
shaping the unconscious
of generations to come. Like a
magician she extracts
my treasure, seals
the cask with a code
known only to her.
In the coming years my
memories will multiply tenfold.
It will be so. Frau Schnaper has decreed it.
The cellar door is locked and my gold
flakes disappear: bridal wreaths
preserved under coves of glass.
Comments
fatboy74 | October 10, 2011 - 12:34
Brilliant as always - I hate the term cinematic, but with this (as most of your writing) I am there and seeing it within the first few lines. :-)
Kilb50 | October 10, 2011 - 12:52
Many thanks fb - good to hear from you as always!
Silver Spun Sand | October 10, 2011 - 12:52
Couldn't agree with fb, more, Kib. Wonderful writing, as always;-)
Tina
Kilb50 | October 10, 2011 - 12:52
Thanks Tina. Best wishes to you.
ScoZen | October 10, 2011 - 21:35
Hello Kilb50.
I don't recall reading your stories before, but this one I enjoyed.
Agree with fb74 and SSS comments.
And what a title for a story "...Gutle Schnaper's Topographic Memory Bank..." brilliant.
ps Intend to visit your other tales soon and catch up.
Regards
iamericsjumper | October 11, 2011 - 21:04
I have learnt a new word 'caleche' and really enjoyed this. The three line stanzas set it out in just the right way. Thanks for a great read.
Kilb50 | October 12, 2011 - 20:53
Many thanks ScoZen & iamericsjumper - much appreciated!
MistakenMagic | October 13, 2011 - 18:34
Love the repeated images of the bridal wreath and gold flakes. I agree with iamericsjumper about the stanza form. A brilliant poem!
Magic xxx
Geoffrey | October 21, 2011 - 09:07
I haven't found your work before either. I'm a softy when it comes to emotional poetry and you've hit the spot with this one!