(i)
Love appeared in the form
of a golden leaf
bold and new-budded
ripe in spring's hazy
splendour. He plucked it,
drank its vibrant, jazzy sap,
chewed the sweet vine
to the heart of the bud.
But the leaf withered
and folded itself into a crisp
and was taken by the wind
on the faintest wisp
of an empty promise
where it floated
like a moth's powdery wing
in autumn's fading light.
(ii)
Love came a second time
cautious and silver-quick
as the eel. Patiently he sat
by the river's edge,
revealed a comforting hand
watched the sleek eel
twist and dart in a haze of bubble,
felt the slow current
of friendship transform
itself into love.
Did the eel take fright ?
It slipped through his fingers,
flickered like a
wayward dream, leaving him
in the shallows to drag
and splash the raw ebb of river,
drink the scented waves
in the cool water's sun.
(iii)
Love called a final time
in his twilight years,
uninvited, unintended -
a stranger to the house.
This love was brash -
a tempestuous song-and-dance act
who squeezed his cheeks
with mottled hands
long since past their prime.
He pushed love away
and love pushed him back;
hid behind his stagnant moat
resisting that bold promise
with flailing arms and weary legs.
But love was resourceful:
it laughed and settled on his knee
caressed his brow with
a fragrant towel
sang to him in a voice
sweeter than the oldest spring vine,
shut tight his much-roamed eye
whispered memories
of those earlier years when the taste
of a lush bud entranced him,
when the glitter of silver
excited him,
when the warmth of perfumed water
filled his senses to the brim
with rememberances of all
that he had been
and was ever meant
to be.
Comments
fatboy74 | February 8, 2012 - 10:48
A pleasure to read.
Kilb50 | February 8, 2012 - 11:00
Many thanks fb. All best wishes.
Richard L. Prov... | February 8, 2012 - 13:36
This is a very nice poem, Kilb50. I really enjoyed the subtle way you introduced a return to love's early flavour. Well done. Cheers, from Richard LP
gerardineanne | February 8, 2012 - 13:50
I enjoyed this very much.Lovely images and I liked your theme of changing love.
Kilb50 | February 8, 2012 - 13:57
Many thanks for your comments Richard and geraldineanne.
Silver Spun Sand | February 8, 2012 - 18:57
Wonderful, Kib;-)
Tina
ScoZen | February 8, 2012 - 22:56
With fb74 on this "...A pleasure to read..."
Regards
Kilb50 | February 9, 2012 - 09:16
Many thanks Silver & Scozen - much appreciated!
shyrewode | February 20, 2012 - 18:58
Flawless. The sharp imagery brings the poem to life.
Steve