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Published by lenchenelf on September 3, 2009 - 19:16
from the ABC set Camera Obscura

As webbed feet
find the perfect moment
to fold wings and swim;

so, you present an image,
pensive,
as cartouche of a soul.

Sing, where tip and paint
caress
surface tension of mind's
vellum,
stretched transluscent
by dream and regret.

Trace remnants of memory
at day break.

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A nice vignette, I particularly liked 'you present a pensive image, as cartouche of a soul'.

Thank you Hilary, much appreciated atb Lena

Brilliant; you do justice to a wonderfull picture by some equally wonderfull imagery Lena.

Chris XXX

Thank you for a lovely comment Chris, just back from a short jolly wi't family in t'Dales...knackered knees and muddy boots :-0) all the best Lenax

Love these lines:

'stretched transluscent
by dream and regret.'

J x

Thanks, very much appreciated, lena xx