trail of light,
white sugar straws,
fizzles sense, sight.
Blizzard of a moment,
Criscringle on the tongue;
in finger spot specks,
winters' song is sung.
minor edit 26.07.10
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Silver Spun Sand | January 2, 2010 - 19:50
I've heard of 'cristingle' but not 'Criscringle'. Nice one;-)
lenchenelf | January 2, 2010 - 20:11
Thanks Tina, it can be spelled Kris cringle, Kris Kringle (Christ Child, the host) etc, but for the modern childs sense of the poem, I tried to tie it more into 12 days of Christmas, so used the 'C' spelling. atb Lena xx
Dynamaso | January 7, 2010 - 13:11
And you're having a heck of a winter too. Yep, have to agree with SSS - nice one.
lenchenelf | January 8, 2010 - 16:28
Thanks D, trying not to mention the word S--w, the media are having a field day with it :-) atb Lenax
Dynamaso | January 9, 2010 - 04:28
You might even say the media is having a 'snow' field day, then :)
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