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Published by Louise178 on March 23, 2011 - 12:10
from the ABC set Poems

Past the gravestones
moon and stars
we will embrace
life's past mistakes
and laugh with joy
for I am the imbecile
holding onto chairs
the walls
shy, embarrassed
as a child
that you can see me
how I am now
there is no talk
but eyes just know
they acknowledge...
but promise promise
you will walk with me
past the gravestones
moon and stars

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Silver Spun Sand | March 23, 2011 - 12:45

This is beautiful, Louise.

Tina

skinner_jennifer | March 23, 2011 - 13:43

Hi Louise,

this is beautiful like Tina said, it's so wonderful
when you find a soul mate who is your best friend
and knows you inside out, as you know them.

I hope I have read this piece correctly.

Thanks for the read.

Jenny.

Louise178 | March 23, 2011 - 13:53

Yes you did read it correctly Jenny, it is about a close friend, other little bits are in there aswell, thank you both for your kind comments.