Grass

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from the ABC set Terry's Poems

I want to tell you about grass.
Not the sort of grass where soldiers lay
Cut down by bow and arrow,
Or by bullet or bomb.

Not the brown stuff either
That withers under the burning sun,
In a far-off country
Beyond the package holiday.

Not even the lush green warm stuff
That hides some young girl’s giggle,
As the guardian of her secret
Is pushed aside for love.

I thought to mention the perfect grass
Where a ball will roll straight and true.
And bounce without leaving its mark,
You wouldn't even notice it was there.

No, the grass I want to talk about
Is the grass where the dog shits
And the tomcats piss
And men suck a blade.

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Comments

fatboy74 | November 18, 2010 - 23:14

Reminds me of the parks of my youth if you add used condoms, broken bottles and a moat of phlegm around each bench. Like the way you lull the reader before the unexpected and stark. :-)

SundaysChild | November 19, 2010 - 05:06

This is unusual and i like it

pikeruk | November 19, 2010 - 13:31

Thanks for your comments 'fatboy and SundaysChild'. As a people we seem to have an obsession about cleanliness but are not so carefull when all about looks so innocent!! ;-)) How many times must I have done what I describe??

Terry

SundaysChild | November 19, 2010 - 19:58

It's very good, i like the style. Keep writing.

pikeruk | November 20, 2010 - 12:52

Thanks for the encouragement Sundays it's appreciated. :-))

Terry