The Foot Of Our Stairs

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My Mum bought us up.
Five kids,
a husband,
and a dog.

A shed of pigeons.

We were washed,
fed,
carried to bed.

She had jobs.
She loved them.
Newsagent,
then factory.
Then her garden.

Then illness.

And she still carries us to bed.

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Comments

jolono | May 22, 2012 - 10:46

Really nice piece Ralph. Enjoyed it.

scratch | May 22, 2012 - 17:03

Excellent piece Ralph, well done.

ephraim crud | May 22, 2012 - 23:11

superbly stark. thank you for sharing.
regards, eph.

denni1 | November 17, 2012 - 08:48

You paint some pic with a few words ..