Near Paddington

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from the ABC set Wild Black Curly Hair

Dead in the house fire.
Nineteen seventy two.
A girl, six years old.
No remains.

Today.
The Father.
A man of sadness,
age and rheumatism,
celebrates her life.

Walking streets,
with his head down.
Nursery rhymes of her,
only for him.

In a pub,
near Paddington,
he buys one drink.

He fumbles loose change.
And in the sepia mirror,
she’s here.

A woman now.
Waving at her Mother.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | September 15, 2008 - 15:22

Wonderfully atmospheric writing. A beautifully crafted poem.

Tina

shoebox | September 15, 2008 - 17:18

Sad, but beautifully expressed. I wouldn't change anything. Good job.

sunshine | September 18, 2008 - 19:46

like the way the pace picks up and love 'nursery rhymes of her' Margot