Flames in the Forest

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from the ABC set POETRY - A Passage of Motion 2

In painful embrace
the firestorm visited a
camouflage of leafy branches

changed trees to blackened sticks

and sun a voyeur above its
perishing landscape

coniferous shadows no longer
protected enclaves for
wildlife nor hideaways
for cautious deer
but charcoal toothpicks
in never ending ranks left and
right on this continuous road
a D. H. Lawrence’s wasteland.

Its claw-back fury reached
up consuming a heli and
three passengers

disappearing along
with carcasses
of deer mice and fowl among
10,000 acres of scorched
soil in Trafalgar Nova Scotia.

© Richard L. Provencher

Published Feb. 2010
Folly Magazine
ISSN 2152-9132

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | June 5, 2010 - 18:37

You paint a vivid picture here with your words, Richard.

Particularly like this:-

"...coniferous shadows no longer
protected enclaves for
wildlife nor hideaways
for cautious deer
but charcoal toothpicks
in never ending ranks..."

Tina

Cavalcaderl | June 6, 2010 - 15:12

new Richard L.Prov
I completely agree with
Silver-Spun-Sands comments too
julie

Richard L. Prov... | August 31, 2010 - 04:05

Thank you for your kind words, Tina. For some reason, I have not been getting the comments such as yours. Richard LP