Grandma, Our Rose (1892-1992)

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from the ABC set POETRY - A Passage of Motion 2

There is a precious garden
at the edge of the river
and we notice a lively
meander, the water is
smooth then rippling

our garden is a bed
of roses, and our hearts
are the roots and the blend
of family and traditions,
our inheritance

you are our Crimson Glory.

A fragrance flows along
with the current, a scent
of fresh roses, some are
pink, others red and

yours stands out, full
and prim, it is erect
and proud-

we watch from the riverbank
and notice with happy smiles
the flow of water taking that
bouquet forward-

we know the river of life goes
on and we sense the loss of
a beloved one, but our rose is
still erect and proud.

We cherish its sweet scent.

© Richard L. Provencher

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | June 30, 2011 - 15:14

Hello Richard,

yet another beautiful read, with a sense of mourning
at the end, but with a lot of hope too.

Thankyou for the read.

Jenny.

Richard L. Prov... | June 30, 2011 - 22:30

Bless you, Jenny, with your continuing great encouraging comments. My grandma on my dad's side was an exceptional woman. When her six sons went off to WW 11, Grandma and Grandpa lost all their farm workers, and so sold the farm. Grandma's smarts and Grandpa's personality garnered them a number of successful businesses. All brothers returned safely after four years at war. Richard LP

Nathan Bednarek | July 29, 2011 - 16:13

A wonderful, ode-like poem. Just a pleasure to read. Well done.

Nathan.