For My Mum

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Written for my Daughter on her mums 60th Birthday
for a Poem in a Bottle

On this Dear Mum your special day
I want to let you know
How much you’ve made my life a joy
And how you helped me grow.

From just a little babe in arms
And then throughout the years
Your caring kept me free from harm
You also wiped away the tears.

And now I want to thank you mum
The only way I know
And that’s to give you something back
For everyone to see

My Love

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Comments

jolono | May 25, 2012 - 08:13

Lovely words, well written, enjoyed it!

skinner_jennifer | May 25, 2012 - 09:31

This had so much sentiment in it.
What a wonderful message for a mum.
Really enjoyed reading.

Jenny.

The Royster | May 25, 2012 - 11:19

You are very kind Jennifer.
I am so pleased you enjoyed it.
Thank you
Roy

The Royster | May 25, 2012 - 11:19

Thank you so much Jolono.
I am so pleased to receive your very kind words.
Roy

Linda Wigzell Cress | May 25, 2012 - 21:03

Nice and from the heart
Linda

The Royster | May 25, 2012 - 22:40

Thank you so much Linda.

mrskatehowell | July 16, 2012 - 08:23

This is very nice, makes me think of my mum.
it touches your heart and people can relate to it.
keep up this great work Roy :)

The Royster | July 16, 2012 - 11:26

Thanks Kate,
As you can gather, I am rather late getting into this and it's all Linda's fault. I'm pleased you like it. Thank you for your kind comments. I guess personal feelings make it easier to put into words how we feel.
I shall read more of yours later.
Best wishes
Roy