hopeful dreamer
By samhennig
Sat, 09 Jul 2011
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Hope is for the forsaken
don't be taken
in by your dreams
it will not be the same when you wake
a sharp cut
dirt infiltrates the blood
the weeds don't scream
as you extricate them
sweat cools the red sizzling skin
rich taste of iron
as you suck the blood in
look at your finger
allow the last to linger
before wiping it away
and carrying on and carrying on and carrying on
time dwindles and falters
a spinning top
hopeful it will end
dreaming of a cut in the endless loop.
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Yes it really does seem as
Yes it really does seem as though you had a lot on your mind- maybe you should look at it again and elaborate but really it is very good . It would be nice if it were longer. The images are very very good.
;)Pia
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You made it even better-
You made it even better- nice ending- well done
;)Pia
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