The diamond

No likes yet ♦

from the ABC set Ramblings of a poetaster

You’re the heartwood of the mighty oak
The cliff against the sea,
You’re the hug tucked in my pocket
That goes everywhere with me,
You’re the shelter from the hurricane
The sun, after the storm,
When I freeze in isolation
You’re the cloak that keeps me warm,
You’re the glowing window
As I travel through the night,
You’re the holder of the lantern
The bringer of the light,
You’re the kindness of a stranger
When I’m feeling down,
You’re the diamond in the coal dust
That amazingly, I found.

Discuss this piece in the abctales forum


Comments

Mangone | January 15, 2010 - 12:38

That’s really beautiful Shoe!
It should be set to music it would make a lovely song.

insertponceyfre... | January 15, 2010 - 12:55

yes, you should be singing this very late, in a nightclub somewhere

shoe | January 15, 2010 - 14:56

mmm, in a slinky silk gown draped over a piano, cigarrette holder artfully trailing from my heavily jewelled fingers, looking out through black thick eyelashes, only spoiled by my comlete inability to hold (oe even recognise) a note...at least the dark would disguise my wrinkles!!

kheldar | January 15, 2010 - 20:16

your words are as beautiful as ever, shoe. We all need to carry a hug in our pockets :--)

insertponceyfre... | January 15, 2010 - 20:19

Shoe, I see you are channelling your inner Lauren Bacall, and that's exactly what I meant

Mangone | January 15, 2010 - 22:50

Watch out for Bogeys then shoe :O)

MistakenMagic | January 16, 2010 - 15:11

Beautiful poem, Shoe! Love the last lines ;)

Magic xxx

Silver Spun Sand | January 16, 2010 - 15:20

Quite delightful, Shirley;-)

Tina x

shoe | January 17, 2010 - 17:48

oh, thank you all so much, will try to hit the right keys with this message,:~}}}}}}

kheldar | January 17, 2010 - 22:47

shoe in a silk gown, I'm all of a flutter. I presume you were referring, of course, to the wrinkles in said gown xx :--)

shoe | January 18, 2010 - 14:33

silver tongued charmer you!!!

SugarHorse | February 4, 2010 - 23:37

"You’re the hug tucked in my pocket
That goes everywhere with me"

I like that line especially, it's very sweet.

I really enjoyed this poem, if it's for someone special inparticular, they are very lucky!!! :) x

kheldar | February 5, 2010 - 00:05

Don't tell 'em it was for me shoe, keep it as our secret xx

shoe | February 5, 2010 - 11:30

Shhh...xxx