West of Carclaze

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from the ABC set Through the square window

It happened late in day
and the flames leap 25ft high
in the darkening sky, so the papers said
and four engines attended.
Afterwards, a patch the size of
2 football fields, or maybe a hanger
was blackened, charred and scorched
right up to the barbed wire where the path ran.
A few small trees must have looked like torches
holding up a beacon to the village.

Rain fell and the sun shone and within days
bracken has risen out of the cinders;
waving on tall stalks, filigree leaves tightly furled
as if still keeping their heads down,
A rush of willowherb studs the ground like static fireworks,
Bluebells shoot out of the warmed earth
quivering demurely, naked of leaves,
A throstle looks upon the greens and blues and blacks
and sings assent.

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skinner_jennifer | May 19, 2011 - 11:23

Hi shoe,

love the way you describe:- A rush of willowherb studs the ground like static fireworks,
Bluebells shoot out of the warmed earth quivering
demurely, naked of leaves,
A throsle looks upon the green and blues and blacks
and sings assent.

So beautifully descriptive. Out of every bad thing,
something good can come.

Yes I really enjoyed this poem.

Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | May 19, 2011 - 18:46

I too love your choice of words in this one Shoe. As jenny says, if we look hard enough, good can come out of almost anything;-)

Tina

shoe | May 19, 2011 - 18:47

Thanks so much Jenny, It was a shocking sight at first, but I was amazed at how quickly nature re-asserted herself! 'out of every bad thing, something good can come' that's what I was hoping to say .:}

SundaysChild | May 19, 2011 - 20:39

Striking imagery shoe