Caught up in a whirlwind
of buying duvets and curtains,
mugs, plates and bowls,
electric kettles and toasters.
So much so, I’d not considered
what it would be like – the leaving.
It didn’t seem five minutes ago,
I’d been buying highchairs
and baby-grows.
The rain was coming down
in stair-rods as they drove off
that morning in a clapped out
Morris Minor. The car packed
to the gills with duffle-bags
and hold-alls – my daughter
and her friend.
Waving goodbye, just in sight,
through the leaves of a potted
avocado plant, lovingly grown
from seed which she couldn’t
leave behind, was her hand,
so fragile, as they hit
the open road.
Comments
Bradene | November 5, 2008 - 13:45
Another winner Tina, this is really gentle in its composition yet it still manages to pierce the heart. Lovely. Val x
MistakenMagic | November 5, 2008 - 17:59
The last stanza was just perfect. You made a simple sentiment very heartfelt. Beautiful :)
Magic xxx
Silver Spun Sand | November 5, 2008 - 18:24
Val, thank you. I have yet to read your latest poems. Busy all day. I shall make time a bit later on, I have promised myself.
But thanks to you for taking time out to read mine and I am glad it was worthwhile:-)
Tina x
Silver Spun Sand | November 5, 2008 - 18:25
Glad you enjoyed it, Magic. It is a day entrenched in my mind, and I only just yesterday found a way of expressing it after so many years.
Tina xxx