Darkness fell; settled over our tent
surreptitiously, like a sleek, black panther
stalking its prey. Crept up on us, unawares,
as dusk does in deepest Dartmoor.
Evening was a windless, warm affair –
the kind of night storms are born of.
The sky was as clear as a bell. Sirius
overhead; green red, blue – shimmering.
We bedded down, side by side – decided
to read for a while. Mine, a steamy love affair
and his, ‘a how to light a campfire – put up
a tent without it falling down’, kind of job.
The candles flickered. Wax tears ran down
the Mateus Rosé bottles in which they stood.
I must have drifted off. The next I knew, felt
his hand brush my foot – a velvet touch.
He continued … moving upwards, ever up…
His fingers, soft on my breasts, like never before,
with a tenderness I could only have dreamt of.
What had rekindled this passion – long-since
smouldering, to suddenly spring alive? Must come
camping more often – this, our first time.
His fingers slip between my thighs. My flesh,
yielding to his touch; malleable – moist. A ripe
Arabian fig. His, and his alone, for the gorging.
My moans grow louder – emerging from unknown
depths; my throat aching in exquisite agony.
All my inhibitions, unleashed! What did it matter?
There was no one to hear me, only the sheep.
“Maureen! For Pete’s sake watch out! You’re
about to squash them! My spectacles, I mean, love.
I’ve been searching for ages, afraid to wake you.
Sorry, pet. It’s OK. Found them now. They slipped
off my nose. Of what were you dreaming do you suppose?”
“Dreaming? Them weren’t no dreams, tiger. Come on!
Don’t stop now … feed those flames. Ignite my fire!”
Comments
MistakenMagic | March 18, 2009 - 20:31
Tina I'm blushing! What a terrific poem! Stanza ten made me luagh out loud - what a change of tone :) The imagery was brilliant, particularly loved:
The candles flickered. Wax tears ran down
the Mateus Rosé bottles in which they stood.
I must have drifted off. The next I knew, felt
his hand brush my foot – a velvet touch.
Magic xxx
Silver Spun Sand | March 18, 2009 - 22:31
Blushing becomes you, Magic:-)
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it ... but I bet, not half as much as I enjoyed writing it;-)
Tina xxx
threeleafshamrock | March 19, 2009 - 13:24
...decided to read for a while. Mine, a steamy love affair and his, ‘a how to light a campfire – put up
a tent without it falling down’, kind of job... Laughing out loud! Lovely Tina (lovely naughty Tina) from now on, I'm wearing my glasses to bed - and have just booked a camping trip for the summer, lol. Greatly enjoyable work, both for the fun and the passion; and also as Magic pointed out the beautiful imagery. Just BET you had fun writing it ;) Wont ask if it's true; in case you say No! LOL. Fantastic!!!
Chris (God where have my specs gone) ;)
jennifer | March 19, 2009 - 13:39
So, did he oblige?! I'm dying to know...
J x
Silver Spun Sand | March 19, 2009 - 15:55
Glad you enjoyed it, Chris:-) I am always losing mine; specs, that is;-)
Tina xx
Silver Spun Sand | March 19, 2009 - 15:58
Now that would be telling ... Suffice to say that we go to know that particular spot kinda well, over the years;-)
T x
Curse of 222 | March 19, 2009 - 23:59
beautiful, whimsical, and passionate...quite the combo. thoroughly good read.
jason
Silver Spun Sand | March 20, 2009 - 09:20
Jason, much appreciate your comments. They always say that a writer can never look at their own work objectively, so it always more than useful to read what others think. Glad it worked for you:-)
Tina