Spiders

When I read it aloud, the line breaks fall naturally here / for me. Do they do it for you?

"A girl on the bus plucked a spider from my hair/ today.
She said it was annoying her./
With long dark hair and anice smile,/
but young enough to be my daughter,/
so instead of flirting I read my book/
and didn’t see where she got off./
I know that there are things/
which will haunt me for the rest of my life."

Sonora.
I liked the simplicity of this.

"...so instead of flirting..."

Ahh, as they say, as you miss one bus another comes along.