Tricks told to a lover
Tricks sold to another
Tricks rolled undercover
Tricks taught to a loser
Tricks bought by a bruiser
Tricks sought by a user
Tricks turned on a sixpence
Tricks learned for a pittance
Tricks burned and good riddance
A trick of skin
A trick of the light
A trick of sin
A trick of the night
Comments
maisie | May 4, 2011 - 18:14
nice a double rhymer... a feeling of security in the structure.
i enjoyed it!
mikepyro | May 5, 2011 - 07:20
Not the most stunning piece but a solid, well structured piece with a rhyming scheme that actually flows fairly well. While I found some of the words felt tacked on to fit the scheme the overall message and style rings clear. It's darkly humorous at the same time. Keep it up.
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