Goodnight Me

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from the ABC set Lurve Ramblings

The clock ticks between breaths.
I count the seconds.
Turning my head,
salts the pillow...

...I reach out,
sliding my hand over,
to the cold side of the bed;
good night me!

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MistakenMagic | March 6, 2011 - 17:18

'The clock ticks between breaths' - what a wonderful line. So evocative! Well done, Chris, love this one :)

Magic xxx

threeleafshamrock | March 6, 2011 - 17:53

Thanks Magic ;)

Chris XXXX