Seashell Venus

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from the ABC set Poems

With her laughter, light as lacy foam
and her spritely eyes, bright as pearls;
across the seashore, she shall roam;
my pretty, precious, seashell girl.

Wet sand sugaring her fingers
and clinging to her feet and toes;
over shingle, she will linger
till, every single shell, she knows.

There’s horns shed by sea-unicorns
and scalloped shells like fairy fans;
turbans sea-sultans might have worn
ornately carved by Nature’s hand.

She shows me a brown cowrie shell,
clasped tightly like a flower bud;
then bridal veil tidal waves swell
and, over the smooth shoreline, flood.

She leads me to her secret cave
where her brightest treasures are stored.
I stay until the crashing waves
become a gentle sigh once more.

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Comments

maisie | March 11, 2012 - 19:30

nice old fashion metre and read, the occasional duff line (for me anyway) otherwise really well done!

Highhat | March 11, 2012 - 19:59

Stunning
;)Pia

well-wisher | March 11, 2012 - 21:34

Thanks, Maisie. Glad you enjoyed some of it

well-wisher | March 11, 2012 - 21:39

Thankyou, Pia.

well-wisher | March 11, 2012 - 21:40

Thanks alot for the cherries, too. They're much appreciated.

Raventongue | March 11, 2012 - 22:41

I love the imagery here.

Silver Spun Sand | March 13, 2012 - 09:53

I agree. Great stuff;-)

Tina