With her laughter, light as lacy foam
and her spritely eyes, bright as pearls;
across the seashore, she shall roam;
my pretty, precious, seashell girl.
Wet sand sugaring her fingers
and clinging to her feet and toes;
over shingle, she will linger
till, every single shell, she knows.
There’s horns shed by sea-unicorns
and scalloped shells like fairy fans;
turbans sea-sultans might have worn
ornately carved by Nature’s hand.
She shows me a brown cowrie shell,
clasped tightly like a flower bud;
then bridal veil tidal waves swell
and, over the smooth shoreline, flood.
She leads me to her secret cave
where her brightest treasures are stored.
I stay until the crashing waves
become a gentle sigh once more.
Comments
maisie | March 11, 2012 - 19:30
nice old fashion metre and read, the occasional duff line (for me anyway) otherwise really well done!
Highhat | March 11, 2012 - 19:59
Stunning
;)Pia
well-wisher | March 11, 2012 - 21:34
Thanks, Maisie. Glad you enjoyed some of it
well-wisher | March 11, 2012 - 21:39
Thankyou, Pia.
well-wisher | March 11, 2012 - 21:40
Thanks alot for the cherries, too. They're much appreciated.
Raventongue | March 11, 2012 - 22:41
I love the imagery here.
Silver Spun Sand | March 13, 2012 - 09:53
I agree. Great stuff;-)
Tina