I am a sixteen year old girl.I am really enjoying writing poetry.I do not have alot of experience therefore If you have any views on how I can improve any of my poems, then drop me a comment.
An apology is needed for my childish manners.
Thanks for everybody who's helped me, and for commenting and reading x
Beeme x
My Stories
Stereotypical images Submitted on March 9, 2010 - 21:06 | 59 reads
Sometimes Submitted on March 1, 2010 - 21:13 | 124 reads
Unfinished Submitted on February 22, 2010 - 21:34 | 159 reads
Writers Block Submitted on February 17, 2010 - 20:40 | 130 reads
Outside Submitted on February 15, 2010 - 12:08 | 183 reads
I try Submitted on February 8, 2010 - 16:21 | 153 reads
Heaven Submitted on February 1, 2010 - 18:51 | 163 reads
Precious beginnings Submitted on January 23, 2010 - 23:31 | 171 reads
Snowdrops in winter Submitted on January 22, 2010 - 21:42 | 156 reads
Keep on smiling- story for Haiti Submitted on January 21, 2010 - 13:47 | 237 reads
Final moments Submitted on January 17, 2010 - 20:52 | 119 reads
Forgetting Submitted on January 15, 2010 - 20:58 | 140 reads
Sunrise Submitted on January 12, 2010 - 20:18 | 138 reads
Mistaken love Submitted on January 5, 2010 - 21:13 | 244 reads
Time Submitted on January 2, 2010 - 21:55 | 131 reads
My Warrior Princess Submitted on December 30, 2009 - 20:24 | 192 reads
It was over. Submitted on December 25, 2009 - 16:39 | 156 reads
Moving on. Submitted on December 20, 2009 - 14:45 | 252 reads
Reflections Submitted on December 13, 2009 - 16:11 | 198 reads
Friendship Submitted on December 12, 2009 - 22:22 | 176 reads
Saved my life Submitted on December 8, 2009 - 22:43 | 155 reads
Footprints Submitted on December 6, 2009 - 20:49 | 209 reads
I Submitted on December 2, 2009 - 17:21 | 212 reads
Forgetting that Submitted on November 30, 2009 - 19:40 | 208 reads
You Submitted on November 28, 2009 - 11:34 | 137 reads
I thought Submitted on November 26, 2009 - 18:03 | 162 reads
Learn to love me Submitted on November 22, 2009 - 14:19 | 365 reads
Antony and Cleopatra Submitted on November 20, 2009 - 18:06 | 175 reads
Love me Submitted on November 18, 2009 - 17:00 | 332 reads
Eclipse Submitted on November 15, 2009 - 15:59 | 145 reads
You told me Submitted on November 14, 2009 - 11:35 | 303 reads
I Submitted on November 8, 2009 - 11:43 | 244 reads
Confessions to an Ex Submitted on November 7, 2009 - 21:57 | 173 reads
Can you smell the jasmine blossom? Submitted on October 26, 2009 - 19:11 | 278 reads
Irony Submitted on October 23, 2009 - 21:00 | 166 reads
Magic Submitted on October 10, 2009 - 16:39 | 151 reads
Salvation Submitted on October 1, 2009 - 06:25 | 176 reads
Untitled Submitted on September 27, 2009 - 09:26 | 199 reads
Temptress Submitted on September 5, 2009 - 20:09 | 221 reads
I forgot Submitted on September 4, 2009 - 20:01 | 323 reads
Desperate romantic Submitted on September 3, 2009 - 17:32 | 260 reads
One moment ago Submitted on August 31, 2009 - 16:17 | 285 reads
Behind the mask Submitted on August 25, 2009 - 09:41 | 266 reads
She could not part Submitted on August 22, 2009 - 19:54 | 252 reads
As I watch you leave. Submitted on August 20, 2009 - 10:23 | 261 reads
what is it? Submitted on August 19, 2009 - 21:21 | 269 reads
Easter Island Heads. Submitted on August 17, 2009 - 20:36 | 240 reads
A "BEEME" and " CAVALCADERL" POEM Submitted on August 12, 2009 - 19:18 | 195 reads
"CAVALCADERL" and "BEEME" EDIT Submitted on August 11, 2009 - 21:06 | 280 reads
Life Line Submitted on July 31, 2009 - 18:00 | 290 reads
The Magic Of Poetry Submitted on July 27, 2009 - 19:53 | 203 reads
Your love killed me. Submitted on July 22, 2009 - 17:20 | 274 reads
Each day the sun rises... Submitted on July 21, 2009 - 17:36 | 234 reads
Worshiping Budda Submitted on July 17, 2009 - 21:48 | 218 reads
Little Rap For Pinda Submitted on July 16, 2009 - 18:49 | 302 reads
Slowly Saving Earth. Jupiter. Submitted on July 15, 2009 - 19:01 | 250 reads
Dance with me Submitted on July 13, 2009 - 13:15 | 246 reads
Abu Simbel, Egypt. Submitted on July 12, 2009 - 11:07 | 256 reads
You've perfected your lines.. Submitted on July 11, 2009 - 09:10 | 298 reads
I can hear the slight echoes.. Submitted on July 10, 2009 - 10:37 | 249 reads
So I am struck by our love.. Submitted on July 9, 2009 - 11:14 | 267 reads
Lips must part.. Submitted on July 8, 2009 - 13:34 | 276 reads
Robotic rant. Submitted on July 7, 2009 - 19:44 | 327 reads
Hang on Submitted on July 7, 2009 - 12:51 | 259 reads
An Angel Submitted on July 6, 2009 - 14:52 | 235 reads
Cowboy Submitted on June 20, 2009 - 15:57 | 300 reads
2 War (Peace struggle ) Submitted on June 18, 2009 - 11:40 | 307 reads
War (peace struggle) Submitted on June 17, 2009 - 21:18 | 343 reads
We can explain everything, (Officer) Submitted on June 16, 2009 - 10:29 | 260 reads
Perhaps.. (You're..) Submitted on June 15, 2009 - 13:24 | 274 reads
ABC community, Is this any better? Submitted on June 12, 2009 - 10:33 | 436 reads
Shocks 1,2,3 Submitted on June 6, 2009 - 20:37 | 238 reads
Cakes, Smiles, Love Submitted on May 17, 2009 - 10:20 | 303 reads
River Of Dreams Submitted on May 15, 2009 - 12:23 | 247 reads
