Rome

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You never knew what I felt-
your voice a tolling bell, death jam;
calling me out from the shadows
and every-time I rose again and again-
flashing like Rome eternal and mighty
but doomed to fall down even lower.
Elating me to new heights
where only Gods trod
sending out their thread lights;
warmed in the palms of their hands.
Laughing…
as my light was exhausted by your smile.

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insertponceyfre... | June 25, 2011 - 21:27

I really enjoyed this - fantastic last couple of lines beeme. not completely sure about Gods trod

Highhat | June 26, 2011 - 08:18

Nice one Beeme

SundaysChild | June 26, 2011 - 14:27

Love that last line Beeme xx

cormacru999 | July 16, 2011 - 20:51

yeah that last line is great! good close.